When I See Stars - Comments

xXcrazy-desiXx (100)

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okay i have to say i love the way you write... it just seems to flow :) im not a fan of one driction but i will read the other two just because this one is awesome :) my favroite line is frrom the frist chaprter 'I made a silent vow to live –just fucking live.' love that line :) sol keep it up because your good :)

March 30th, 2013 at 01:16am

galassia. (100)

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I'm not a One Direction fan, but that's aside from the point. I really adore your vivid descriptions. They make the story. It shows us, the reader what is truly going on. It paints a picture in our mind as it should. Good job!

November 27th, 2012 at 02:00am

the_space_between (100)

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I like this a lot so far. I can't wait to see how this unfolds:)

November 21st, 2012 at 04:45am