Love it! You need to make the next chapter longer though ;) But I'm very excited to see what happens with her and Chase and can't wait until she meets Jeremy! I'm sure it's going to be hilarious. <3
It's great! Especially for only having came up with it an hour ago! And I love your layout. The one I made never would cooperate with me. -_- But yours is awesome!
I love to read your writing, because it's always great. I can't wait to see where you take this, and I hope you actually stick to it this time. ;)