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I just started reading this and it is SO GOOD.
I wish Niall wasn't such a douche though. Lol.
And I can tell Liam likes her in more than a friend way, and it seems, based from the kiss, that she enjoyed it as well.
I have a feeling that if Niall doesn't get his act together that she will be falling for Liam. Unless she has really strong feelings for Niall. Lol. Which it seems she has some feelings for him. Ahhhh this is intense! Ha
Update soon please :)

Y U NO MAKE THIS EASY?!
i like Liam, i like Niall, and he actually apologized to her making me happy and then Liam has to go and screw it all by kissing her.

OH MY GOD YES YES LIAM ALL THE WAY YES I LIKE LIAM AND HER VERY MUCH YES BUT NIALL APOLOGIZED WUTT

WHAT NOOOOOOOOO I LIKE THEM BOTH

But I was really hoping that a relationship between her and Niall developed but LIAM and someone is bound to get hurt ;_;

they both deserved it.
fuck niall for being a douche and screw liam for not stopping it.
i really hope something happens that pulls niall out of his phase. just love her or something.

mooooore please. very soon.

Noooo Liam can't have a cruuuush cause then if Niall is to fall in love with her then bby Liam will be hurt and we don't want that! I am just hoping that Niall stops being a douchenozzle soon and starts treating Marjorie better cause its not fair for her!

YES LIAM DOES HAVE A CRUSH AND I AM 100% TEAM LIAM UNTIL NIALL STOPS BEING AN ASSHOLE SO YES LIAM LIAM LIAM MAYBE LIAM FOREVER BECAUSE NIALL IS JUST AN ASS BUT IDK ASDFGHJKL; UPDATE SOON!

God damn Niall....quit being a bitch

Oh no Niall just let her in! Don't be such an asshole! Update soon, please :)

He really does need to get his head out of his ass! Haha but I love how this story is going!

man. niall. you're so hot when you're mad.
but still an asshole.
i hope he pulls his head out of his butt soon.

new favourite story. love it so much.

Okay well he is possibly the biggest asshole ever. hmph.

omg. i hope she puts him in his place.
dear lord i wrote the first comment on my phone.
awesome auto correct.

Well this is definitely a new side of the blonde.
I hippie she pits him in his place.

daaaang he needs to STOP being an asshole and just be his cute self cause I see some cute couple thing going on DANG

I really like this story so far! Niall seems like a jerk, but he has to get better... right?
Haha update soon!

<3

I love the concept!! And although he's an ass I think they're cute haha hope you decide to carry on with it!