Willie - Comments

i already wrote a comment but i deleted it because it wasn't good enough. nothing i can say would be good enough. this story is just that. hell, you know what, this should be in a binding, in the library, or a store. i love it that much.

This is so perfect. I really like Louie's character. He seems so cute. I adore Willie. She seems so outgoing. I wish I could be like that. Can't wait for more.

That's it? =( Where's the rest?! I need More! MORE!!!!!!!
I loved it too much.

This is the cutest story ever, like seriously. Louie is such a likable guy and Willie is well, Willie. I really like them as a pair and a characters. Update soon please :)

I like this so very much I can't even decribe it. One of the best stories I've read on this site actually.

Chapter Six: This was so adorable up until the end, because then I felt so meloncally and truly heart broke. Why didn't she say it back? This cannot be the end. She has to like him, he's so precious, and she's such a spontaneous oddball and I love them. I have a feeling past issues are the troubles with her, maybe trust issues or failed relationships. Maybe it could be something else, but all I know is that I hope this is just a misleading end here.

Overall: Overall this story has joined my 'Top Stories I've Read on Mibba' list, and it's not hard to see why. I enjoyed the short chapter style of telling this story, as well as the characters. It was believable and it was quick to worm its way into my heart. I also adored the content of the story and the writing style- you would add a line here or there that just made the paragraph or the entire chapter perfect and left me feeling so proud of your abilities. I would enjoy seeing this story as an actual short novel one day because I think it is good enough to be published! I'm glad to have chosen this story to review for the Mibba magazine :D

Chapter Five: I'm really glad she actually had a reason for leaving and wasn't playing Louie or leading him on. I can't say all that much about this chapter, as there isn't much in it, but it's definitely on the cute side as well.

Chapter Four: Such a beautiful chapter, let me tell you. I felt so sentimental and heart broken, but from the sweetness, not because it was that sad. My favorite line of this chapter had to have been, "I think you're worth ten bucks." If it had been said to me, it would have been a cute, adorable thing that would have touched my heart immediately. It would have made me feel so important to her. I can only imagine how Louie feels. And I love how she think she's looking for something that isn't there and I love how they just stayed up talking and gahh, I love everything.

Chapter Three: I'm defiantly seeing Willie as a more likable character, and defiantly more interesting as well. She's not random per say, but something along those lines... Spontaneous? Yes, I think so. And Louie is the cutest type of fool- a fool head over heals. He's so adorable when he's with her, can't breathe and blanking on his own name? How sweet!

Chapter Two: Can I just die from the adorable overload in this chapter? Like, please? So cute, running into her by chance, and seeing as she's an assertive girl, she totally called him out. And I love his name! Names with alliteration are my sweet spot, no joke, and I call them superhero names: Peter Parker, for example. And oh God, the end of this chapter, telling each other how silly their names are, it was so cute!

Chapter One: I adore this intro. I can already see what type of girl she is, and I think she knows exactly what she's capable of. I also like the fact that they guy is a lead singer in a band. You don't get that a lot unless you read fanfiction, so it's good to see.

LOL, JAMIE RYAN DEE. c: awh. this is perfect by the way.

I ALSO LIKE HOW LOUIE IS JAMJARS SDLKFJSD

This is so beautiful, oh gosh. <3 Every chapter is short, but it tells so much. He's so into her akdglsdgknsd

youre perfect this is perfect

i love, love this. :) im subscribing, can't wait for more.

i like this! i love their introduction. willie is pretty sassy. I cant wait for more.