The Francos - Comments

Yo.....I don't think that was really fair. She could have gotten it in the bathroom and then got punished later on. I mean, if Dave pulled me in a bathroom, we wouldn't leave for a while, but that's just me.

Seriously though, you're torturing me with these chapters. WHY CAN'T SHE JUST HAVE DAVE'S PENIS?!?!?!

Alright. I'm done being dramatic, but I would really appreciate it if you updated within the next twenty minutes :)

Aww snap! I'm scared right now. She broke a rule. I am soooo interested in seeing how this plays out

@ McLover
I will most definitely stay patient and loyal. I know you are going to write an awesome chapter!!! I'm super excited

@ jmdb1416
why thank you! um...i'm trying to update, but every time i start writing something, i don't think it's good enough so i start over. i think i have started over about five times already. i just don't want to half ass it and disappoint anybody and i'm still trying to figure out what i'm going to have Lillith do in her state. I have so many ideas swirling around and i'm trying to figure out the best way to put them together in a cohesive way. I'll try to get my thoughts together soon because i really want to get this chapter out for you guys. you deserve it for being so patient

Lillith is unfulfilled and SO AM I haha. I absolutely need an update. I've been on this website for years and now I have finally found a story to hold my attention. I've re-read all 12 chapters about three times over. I need chapter 13. Plus thirteen is my favorite number so I know the chapter is going to be good. But plz plz PLZ update. You're doing such a great job writing you can't stop now.....

I love this story!!! I love the fact that its not all about the sexual things, but it also has an actual storyline. Please update again soon!

@ ImSoFierce
that's awesome. i bit glad i took your comment virginity lol. i'll try to update soon. before sunday. thanks for your comment!

I am unfulfilled! I need more of this story!! AHHH!!!!

im angry!! you can't just put her in a car with two very attractive men, start something, and then not finish it! It's not fair to her! It's not fair to them! It's not fair to me! lol im being dramatic. Anyway, this chapter was for me??? <3 thank you so much! and honestly, the chapters don't have to be absolutely perfect. Chaos is good a lot of the time :) but seriously, this is my favorite story, and Dave Franco is my favorite man in the entire world right now. I have no words to explain my feels towards him. All i can say is....if he were to show up on my doorstep tomorrow and ask me to marry him, we'd be on our way to vegas in a matter of seconds. He's just....*sigh* a beautiful human being. and James? Well it's no secret that he's gorgeous. This story having both men just makes everything better. I can tell I'm going to cry towards the end. I feel like something big is going to happen, and im so excited for it!!! and this comment just became extremely long...my apologies, but try to update soon, yeah? I don't want to pester you any more than I already have lol

<3

Ps I've been on this site for a few years now and it's the first time I've commented on a story =]

This is definitely my favorite story! I can't even count how many times I've reread it while waiting for a new chapter to come out. Great job!

LOVE THIS. omg im so addicted. love love love love love :)

@ sunshine'n'sarcasm
i don't know if you know this, but i love you! i love your dedication to the story and i want to make this chapter really good a even dedicate it to you because you're so persistent and i love it! i want it to be absolutely perfect so that's why it's taking so long. i put a lot of time and effort into this story so you only have the best of what i can offer to you.

im going to keep commenting until you update. you're going to hate me by the end of the week :)

i'll be back tomorrow xD

YO!!!!

i just want a chapter....that's just what i want. i need it. and i would very much appreciate it if i got one....or two...or three....or four....or five, hell even six!!! i just want an update. im dying here :/

I'm dying here. Update please!! I just re-read all of the chapters. I need my fix!!!

You know the drill.

Love this story. Literally had me horny for almost all of it lol. Just amazing, please update as soon as possible.

Love this story. Literally had me horny for almost all of it lol. Just amazing, please update as soon as possible.

YOU. WILL. UPDATE. NOW!!!!!!! I DEMAND IT!!!

oh, and if you ever leave me hanging like that again, i might be forced to kill you.....slowly

sorry.