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  • Kuolonenkeli

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    Liked :3
    January 11th, 2013 at 08:16pm
  • alumiinia

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    This was really good, and it sounded very real, like, I can picture this in the real life xD I hope you continue, there are a lot of things you can work on, talking about Columbine, a lot of tension and shit, I loved this
    November 8th, 2012 at 05:10pm
  • Freddygirl

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    This was really good. I was thinking that it might be a little tasteless, with the subject matter and all. But I realy liked it, and you didn't push it far with the Manson/ Twiggy aspect of it, which was good. All in all, it was a good story. It would be really cool if you tried to continue with it.
    November 7th, 2012 at 10:42pm
  • Justified Sundays

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    I thought this was written very tastefully. I love it a lot. Thank you for writing Manson with a soul, because that's how he really is. I loved it <3
    November 7th, 2012 at 08:41pm
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