If You Want Me to Stay - Comments

I'm reading this

@ Such_A_Drag
I'm working on it, I swear! I've been so busy with work and school but I am writing in between everything and as of right this second, I am writing! Just give me a little bit more time and I'll have it posted soon!

Morreee pweezz?

I quite enjoy this so far! Please update soon :)
That topless picture of Harry is yummy lol

Update soon!

OH I LIKE THIS!

FINALLY!!! Loved it!

I like this so far!

YES. THIS IS GOING TO BE AMAZING.

Really excited about this! Can't wait for the next update

This is really, really good. You are very good at connecting the reader with your character. I really love the way you have the character describe the silence and the pauses while she is speaking. It gives the dialogue a nice rhythmic flow. Very good job.