@ Such_A_Drag I'm working on it, I swear! I've been so busy with work and school but I am writing in between everything and as of right this second, I am writing! Just give me a little bit more time and I'll have it posted soon!
This is really, really good. You are very good at connecting the reader with your character. I really love the way you have the character describe the silence and the pauses while she is speaking. It gives the dialogue a nice rhythmic flow. Very good job.