If You Want Me to Stay - Comments

  • ximone

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    I'm reading this
    January 8th, 2014 at 04:31am
  • Carried.Away.

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    @ Such_A_Drag
    I'm working on it, I swear! I've been so busy with work and school but I am writing in between everything and as of right this second, I am writing! Just give me a little bit more time and I'll have it posted soon!
    November 12th, 2013 at 07:06am
  • fault_in_our_stars

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    Morreee pweezz?
    November 12th, 2013 at 01:35am
  • crazy.sexy.cool

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    I quite enjoy this so far! Please update soon :)
    That topless picture of Harry is yummy lol

    Update soon!
    October 10th, 2013 at 05:17am
  • sfarrell13

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    OH I LIKE THIS!
    March 25th, 2013 at 09:03pm
  • Leslie.

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    FINALLY!!! Loved it!
    March 20th, 2013 at 09:59pm
  • show me love

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    I like this so far!
    November 22nd, 2012 at 07:05am
  • sfarrell13

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    YES. THIS IS GOING TO BE AMAZING.
    November 12th, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • marcellaandrade

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    Really excited about this! Can't wait for the next update
    November 8th, 2012 at 03:19am
  • bernthal.

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    This is really, really good. You are very good at connecting the reader with your character. I really love the way you have the character describe the silence and the pauses while she is speaking. It gives the dialogue a nice rhythmic flow. Very good job.
    November 8th, 2012 at 12:35am