FIRST OF ALL! THE SUMMARY! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!! NIALL MY BABY SUNSHINE WHAT HAPPENS?! OH I LOVE YOU NIALL BUT THAT LITTLE NOTE IS HEARTBREAKING OH DEAR GOD!! *sobs*
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! FIRST THE SUMMARY AND NOW THIS SHORT LITTLE INTRODUCTION THINGY AND IT JUST MAKES ME MORE INTRIGUE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE STORY AND NIALL'S BACKSTORY AND EVEN THOUGH YOU HAVEN'T PROPERLY INTRODUCED MEGHAN BUT THE WAY SHE'S MENTIONED ALREADY MAKES ME INTERESTED IN HER. SHE SEEMS LIKE A GENUINELY GOOD CHARACTER AND I LOVE NOTHING MORE THAT A VERY WELL-DEVELOPED CHARACTER! I SHOULD STOP WITH THE CAPSLOCK. IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE I'M YELLING TO YOU BUT I'M JUST TOO EXCITED OKAY! CAN'T YOU TELL THAT I'M EXCITED?!! I WANT ME A GOOD NIALL FIC AND I HAVE A FEELING THAT THIS ONE IS THE ONE I'M LOOKING FOR!!
(caps off now)
his accent was to die for... Isn't that the truth though?
I would love to see Niall with multi-colored hair. Like this needs to happen pronto! Niall baby please!
What is the up with all the bruises on my baby Nialler's arms?? Oh I love that Irish bastard so much it pains me to even imagine him getting hurt. Even fictional!
"Niall Horan is quite the catch.
Okay! So personally, I think that's a good thing? But why do I feel like the way Uncle Wesley said it only means trouble? Uh-oh! This should be interesting! Ah why are you this amazingnesssss???
Neal Howell?? Who is Neal Howell? Why do I feel like Neal Howell is somewhat related to a certain Niall Horan?
WHAT THE ACTUAL HELLA WHAT??!! And now I am even more intrigued with Meghan! Now! What the actual heck happens to her family?! And whaddup with all the bruises? Bruises... chill, okay!
Anyway this is great! Just as I'd expected. So beautifully executed. And so perfectly written and Niall is such a darling and I JUST WANT MORE OKAY!
I noticed in the chapter after the introduction, there are parts where you still use 'me' or 'my' instead of 'her' or 'she'. Maybe a reread would help. I understand that it's a rewrite so a few slips are understandable.
Anywhoooooo.... I can't wait to see more of this. Yes, please!!
Soooo Neal is hot as hell! But man this chapter was heavy. I had to go to a therapist for a while. Before I showed them that I was smarter than the system and pretended that I was fine so I could get out of there. That was fun... I feel so lost. I need to know what's happening! Why did Meg have to move and what does what happened with her parents have to do with it all? There are so many questions. And then there's Niall....where's that little bugger? I love you darling. So friggin much :)
okay to be honest i'm confused with everything like what is even going on anymore, drugs, Uncle Wesley and bad intentions, what? and i don't really think it has anything to do with your writing, maybe just my comprehension of it (((((: but seeing as how unstable Meghan can be, i feel like she MIGHT have a bit of a drug problem, but maybe not as bad as Kamile thinks and i have no idea what team i'm on???
I really love this story- I was reading your latest chapter and in the in I was like WTF then I went to click the next chapter and.... You left me a cliff hanger!!!!!! Why? Nooooo!!!
I definitely have my heart set on Niall being his roommate or maybe even family member and that's why they looks so much alike? I'm pretty sure the picture was of Niall and Neal and the office downstairs was Niall's mysterious room. She put the picture in her bag and mumbled "You cannot trust anyone these days." I'm sooooooo sure that has a deeper meaning! That's why I'm absolutely positive that Niall is connected to Neal in some way. :D I cannot wait to find out where this goes!
OH MY GOSH WE'RE GETTING CLOSER I CAN FEEL IT IN MY BONES AND I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED
1. maybe Niall's? 2. i think she may have seen a picture of Niall and Neal together or something; for some reason, i'm formulating this idea that Niall and Neal were friends and something happened??? maybe not even plausible, but hey, it's a shout in the void, and that's good enough for me (:
This story is brilliant (and confusing at times) but this small chapter was a bit depressing. Knowing that he's losing his mind over Meghan is so sad I just can't handle it! I feel bad for both of them.. so bad. HOWEVER, I love this story and congrats on 100+ comments! Not sure if I've told you this before but congrats again
Ooh! Neal is attractive! But great chapter and WHAT?! SHE AND CAMILLE ARE ADOPTED!!? I'm about as surprised as she is OMG! Like I don't... I can't... I just... I'm sorry. Neal is cute with his little 'oh did you like the green tea? Pretty good right?' I just... So Niall wasn't in any of the recent chapters, correct? THE CONFUSION IS REAL! THE STRUGGLE! My brain yo... My brain is messed up but I love this story. Always have. Always will. I don't even remember how I found this story but I'm glad I did c:
OF FUCKIONG COURSE NEAL'S ATTRACTIVE WHY IS NIALL NOT ENOUGH YOU HAD TO ADD IN MORE ATTRACTIVENESS OKAY IS THIS PAYBACK FOR SOMETHING WRONG WHY i sense a love triangle btw
well isn't neal a bowl of deliciousness and i am still so flipping confused about this whole story SO CONFUSED but i kind of like it even though my head hurts hahahaa
HOW MANY TIMES ARE THESE PEOPLE GOING TO LIE TO THIS POOR CONFUSED GIRL?! I'm talking about me! I'm just kidding... I FEEL SO BAD FOR MEGHAN THOUGH!
My hatred for her mother is making my blood boil hotter than an inferno! That woman is infuriating and her father sounds like a dick biscuit! pardon my french...
I just... and Neal is her THERAPIST! That makes sense. So what I said in my last comment was kind of correct... somewhat? not really..? Okay... *goes and curls up in the corner*
So was Niall actually talking to her through out the story until the past few chapters or..? I'm still having a hard time deciphering when it was Niall and when it was Neal..?
And needless to say I still love this story and the way it has developed over the time it has. Never a dull moment. :) Keep it up!
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! FIRST THE SUMMARY AND NOW THIS SHORT LITTLE INTRODUCTION THINGY AND IT JUST MAKES ME MORE INTRIGUE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE STORY AND NIALL'S BACKSTORY AND EVEN THOUGH YOU HAVEN'T PROPERLY INTRODUCED MEGHAN BUT THE WAY SHE'S MENTIONED ALREADY MAKES ME INTERESTED IN HER. SHE SEEMS LIKE A GENUINELY GOOD CHARACTER AND I LOVE NOTHING MORE THAT A VERY WELL-DEVELOPED CHARACTER! I SHOULD STOP WITH THE CAPSLOCK. IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE I'M YELLING TO YOU BUT I'M JUST TOO EXCITED OKAY! CAN'T YOU TELL THAT I'M EXCITED?!! I WANT ME A GOOD NIALL FIC AND I HAVE A FEELING THAT THIS ONE IS THE ONE I'M LOOKING FOR!!
(caps off now)
his accent was to die for... Isn't that the truth though?
I would love to see Niall with multi-colored hair. Like this needs to happen pronto! Niall baby please!
What is the up with all the bruises on my baby Nialler's arms?? Oh I love that Irish bastard so much it pains me to even imagine him getting hurt. Even fictional!
"Niall Horan is quite the catch.
Okay! So personally, I think that's a good thing? But why do I feel like the way Uncle Wesley said it only means trouble? Uh-oh! This should be interesting! Ah why are you this amazingnesssss???
Neal Howell?? Who is Neal Howell? Why do I feel like Neal Howell is somewhat related to a certain Niall Horan?
WHAT THE ACTUAL HELLA WHAT??!! And now I am even more intrigued with Meghan! Now! What the actual heck happens to her family?! And whaddup with all the bruises? Bruises... chill, okay!
Anyway this is great! Just as I'd expected. So beautifully executed. And so perfectly written and Niall is such a darling and I JUST WANT MORE OKAY!
I noticed in the chapter after the introduction, there are parts where you still use 'me' or 'my' instead of 'her' or 'she'. Maybe a reread would help. I understand that it's a rewrite so a few slips are understandable.
Anywhoooooo.... I can't wait to see more of this. Yes, please!!