Uncle Wesley's Flower Shop - Comments

Oh baby doll you've done it again. You've made me smile like freaking crazy the whole time I was reading. I freaking love you :)
Kam is a bitch and I hate her. Hate her. There is no excuse for her pathetic self.
And look at me being all sassy and cute ;)
A DATE WITH LIAM?! Okay wait, excuse me while I go die in a corner because I'm so happy :))

I don't like Kam!!

First off: your layout is stunning. Absolutely beautiful! And your summary is very short and sweet; I love the way you go from saying that she doesn't know much about him to the fact that she understands him. It's very powerful and definitely intriguing. :3

I'm guessing the girl in the prologue either has an accent or is young, otherwise, I know less about One Direction than I thought I did. But I think it's such a nice way to start. You haven't yet introduced who the main character is and we know no more about her than we did from the summary, which is a very strong and appealing way to start a story.

I, Meghan Dylan, does nothing, except watch. Should be 'do nothing', I think, because otherwise it's a tense switch. But in other news I GEDDIT I GEDDIT YOU REVEALED IT IT WAS HER SISTER. Once again, your main character's being very illusive, which I love. It sets up a mysterious vibe that has me all to put things simply and strangely.

Okay, so I don't even know her name but I'm already loving her. I love how sassy and sharp she is; it's really refreshing to have a protagonist with such a direct way of thinking and narrating.

Niall looked at me and smiled. That smile got old the minute he opened his mouth. Okay, you are fabulous. I actually cannot stop smiling. I'm probably being ridiculous but I love the sassy way that she describes Niall and reacts to meeting him.

Okay, now you're bringing out the feels. I think it's so neat the way little hints are given or comments are made and you don't delve further into them this early in the story. Just little comments like 'His lips started to quiver' -- leaving it be after that. It's such a unique way to write. It really is. And I love it.

Your dialogue's great too, and the way your characters interact (especially Kamile and Meghan) is refreshingly realistic. So many people try to overdo their dialogue or interactions in order to make it overly meaningful or humorous, and I find that yours is just so easy to read. I know that I for one struggle with interactions and dialogue at times, and so I am jealous of your skill. XD

Kamile is such a bitch. No one's perfect... jebus, she seems so callous about it all.

smiling like a bush of roses and bees. Can I just.... can I just... ugh, perfection. I love that description. So much. Because it's just thrown in there but it's so Kamile -- deceivingly beautiful like a rose and yet fearsome and as mean as a bee. I love your writing. I really do.

Okay, this comment has ended up really long and is probably mostly full of crap, but I'm glad you gave me this story to read! You're a brilliant writer with refreshing prose and complex characters. Well done. (:

Hmm. I don't really know what to think about Kamile. She seems like a bitch, but people always say things sometimes aren't what they seem

I don't like her sister, I have a friend that is like that and it pisses me off how she treats people. Wonder why she HAD to hurt guys and play games with them? Leave Niall alone, he's too innocent for this! Oh god am I going to see him cry in heart ache?

Aww Liam!!! :D
But still bad sister, go away and leave her be!

Lovely update sweet cheeks:)
Can't wait to see how this date goes...
xxxx

I don't like her sister, I have a friend that is like that and it pisses me off how she treats people. Wonder why she HAD to hurt guys and play games with them? Leave Niall alone, he's too innocent for this! Oh god am I going to see him cry in heart ache?

Aww Liam!!! :D
But still bad sister, go away and leave her be!

Lovely update sweet cheeks:)
Can't wait to see how this date goes...
xxxx

Kam better not hurt my baby.

I really like this so far! update soon, please!

This is pure perfection.
But Niall with bruises? Let me kiss them away? The poor baby, he just needs a hug the size of the universe :(
I love you and I love this story baby doll, so much <3

Oh man first person is always hard to start out with,don't worry sweetie you're doing great!

I love this story so much you have no idea:3
It's cute and Ohhh poor baby Niall :(

Update soon!

excuse me while I fangirl and cry over this story bye

No. Niall can't have bruises. I'll cry.

Oh my gosh! I need more than this!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!?!?!
K thanks! :)

Why do you have to be such a tease!??
I'm excited to see where this takes me as a reader :)
Can't wait for more amazing chapters my love!

omg why. you make such perf little banners and lyts, can you share your secrets or no okay I see.
can you give us the first chapter or? I simply love your fics.
lol, can't wait to see what this'll have

Okay, Im dying again.