Knife Blood Nightmare - Comments

One of my all time favorites since y’all started this roller coaster!

@ a3r0dactyl
I didn't realize you've been writing this for 6 years. Goodness. Good job both of you. You guys update when you can and want too. Good luck adulting as well.

@ Amethyst Violet
Aw thanks so much for the comment! It means a lot to us that you've been following it for so long! I am working on a reply right now - when Lauren and I started this story I was in university for my first degree so I had oodles of time. Now I'm a full time teacher, planning a wedding and running a household so finding time to write can be tough! Please bear with us!

I started reading this story in July 2018, and have only read it at work when I can. I finally finished the last updated chapter today. Interesting story both of you, and I look forward to more chapters.

I look forward to any and all updates! :)

@ WednesdaysCoffin
Awawaw, you're the sweetest! <3

There's still so much more to the story yet to come, and with any luck once Wifi and I have our lives back on track, we'll get right back into it! Keep an eye on the updates :)

I love how different this story is and I'm in the process of reading it for the second time!

I need all of the updates!!!

Oh my jeebus!!!!! I was reading through this chapter and I wanted to strangle Effy until the life left her eyes for going and talking to Andrew and Housen. Then reading about her going to see Devin I wanted to, as Abbey would say, put a bullet between her eyes. But, as I continued to read, I kept think, 'Damn Effy, you really have learned a few things.' As the chapter came to the fight with Chris, I got angry. Mainly because he kept interupting her while she tried to explain, (which happens almost everytime so you would think I would be used to it by now). After that, I was like, 'That's right! Everyone understimates her because she wasn't raised in this life. But bam motherfuckers, she got your asses out of trouble!!!'

But as for my usual questions. Are Devin and Ricky going to recant their statements? How long is the peace going to last this time? Will everything return to normal now that Lorenzo, TJ and Abbey are back home? Are Housen and Andrew going to come back for them soon? What are Housen and Andrew going to do now that they know their plan has been foiled?

Now that my hands are cramping from typing all this shit on my tiny ass phone, I'm going to conclude this like I do every other time I comment. I love this update so much. I can't explain it. You ladies have a true talent for writing. I love you both, even if you are trying to kill by giving my a stroke, heart attack, or causing me to smoke myself into an early grave (which I guess is my own fault).

@ foREVer-a-creature
I'm glad we could pick you up on a crappy day ! : )

I swear to fucking god, I will kill Andrew. This is all his fault. I would love to just rearrange his pretty little face. UGGG!! At least Effy is back home and I'm not worrying about her anymore. Its bullshit that they took Abbey without her name even being on the fucking warrant! IT'S COMPLETE AND UTTER BULLSHIT!!!!!

Now for the questions swirling in the black hole called my mind. Why did they send Effy home? Why haven't Lorenzo and TJ gotten more than one fucking phone call if they have been in there for multiple days? How is Jacky dealing with Abbey being taken by a bunch of complete dickheads? Is Jacky going to have his turn soon? I wonder if Chris is going to put up a fight when they come to get him? Why haven't they taken Jessica in if they are wanting to take down the Bell family?

But as I said before, so many questions, so few answers. Once again, you ladies have outdone yourselves on this update. I can't wait for more, but I guess I have too. Anywhore, I'm going to stop this comment after I say that I love you both dearly, even if I don't know you guys in person. And I had a shitty day then I come home to see that this has been updated, the noises I made weren't even human.

@ foREVer-a-creature
Oh my gosh I live for your comments!
Thank you so much for the kind words and Lauren and I hope you enjoy the chapters to come!

Reading these past few updates, has me chain smoking. You ladies are going to be the death of me. I can't even explain my anger and hatred for Andy right now. I mean taking Effy to watch Maxwells' demise, kidnapping her, and now betraying her by being with the FBI. UGGG!!! SOMEBODY NEEDS TO FUCKING FIX THIS SHIT BEFORE I HAVE A MOTHERFUCKING BRAIN ANEURYSM FROM THIS BULLSHIT!!! I am almost in tears from this! I can't put into words how upset I am over a freaking story!!

Once again, my mind can only focus on the questions I have about this recent plot twist. Is Lorenzo okay? How are Abbs, Teej and Jessica doing with Lorenzo not being there? Why is Andy such a damn jackass that he had to go and pull this shit? Why can't everyone just be happy? How is Chris seeing as Effy is in FBI custody? How is Effy holding up? UGGG!! SO MANY FUCKING QUESTIONS, NOT ENOUGH STORY!!! (That is always the story of my life.)

But I have to say, that it means you ladies are doing you job right. If I don't get angry, want to cry, or am on the edge of my seat through the entire update I must not be that into it, but every single update makes me feel like I'm on a damn feels rollercoaster. Again, which means you are going you job as writers. Well, after this long ass comment, I'm going to say that I love you both along with this story.

Is it bad that I expected Jacky and Abbey to have sex so soon?? I'm a little pissed that Chris hit him though. But overall this was a great chapter dispite you thinking it was long.

Oh fuck no! I can't believe he stood her up! In front of her parents no less.. But I honestly should've expected something like this from him. He's such a cocksucker sometimes. UGG! On another note, I can't believe that Jacky still hasn't found the bug Abbey planted on him.

Oh fuck no! I can't believe he stood her up! In front of her parents no less.. But I honestly should've expected something like this from him. He's such a cocksucker sometimes. UGG! On another note, I can't believe that Jacky still hasn't found the bug Abbey planted on him.

OH HELL NO!!! If the guys and Abbey don't kill them, I swear the fucking Satan, I will. I can't believe that they would tell Dimitri that shit! Just uggg! I want bloodshed! Lots of bloodshed. I hope Effy is gonna be okay. Im honestly surprised that Lorenzo wasn't there interogating them. I can't wait for the next update. I just can't get enough of this story... even if it gives me a heartattack with every update.

Fucking finally! Craig fucked up and she ran straight to Jacky! I'm glad she finally realised she loves him! Even if she didn't say it to him. I would love to snap Craig's pathetic little neck right now. I'm so proud of Effy for breaking his nose! I can't wait to read it in her point of view! Just so many feels right now!

@ foREVer-a-creature
I'm so glad you came back to it! It means a lot to Lauren and I <3
I'm amazed our writing could make you feel so much!
And don't worry, all your questions will be answered in due time!
Thanks for sticking with us through all our real life problems :) You rock <3

I had seriously forgotten about this story, so I had to read it all over again.

So many emotions and questions are running through my head. I'm pissed at Craig for cheating on Abbey. I'm beyond pissed at Devin for being a total cuntwipe. I'm jealous of the love that Lorenzo and Jessica share for each other. I'm happy that Effy and Chris are finally together and happy with each other. I'm glad Teej finally found someone he likes. I'm beyond annoyed with Abbey ignoring her feelings for Jacky. I mean come on! Who in their right minds would deny a sexy, British man like Jacky!

My questions are going to drive me nuts. Are Abbey and Jacky going to finally admit they like each other? What's Demitri going to say when he finds out they signed the contract behind his back? Is Chris and Effy's relationship going to last? Why was Devin being such a cocksucker when the contract was signed? Is Max going to be in the picture anymore?

Ugg! So many questions! It's going to drive me insane!! But I absolutly love this story more than I can explain.