November 13th, 2016 at 06:19pm
Tortured Soul - Comments
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Love itNovember 13th, 2016 at 06:13pm
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omg! i love it!October 31st, 2016 at 04:36pm
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@ Angelica Schuyler
:)October 31st, 2016 at 02:10am -
@ jessiocstories
I look forward to the next update!October 31st, 2016 at 02:10am -
@ Angelica Schuyler
thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoy it!October 31st, 2016 at 01:25am -
I really, really love this so far! I look forward to more!October 30th, 2016 at 11:43pm
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The first two chapters of Tortured Soul have been completely rewritten. I really hope that everyone enjoys the revamp. I hope that things brings more depth and dimension to the story and that everyone can really sink their teeth into the story. Happy reading! I would love to know what you think!
@ SkaterGirl.
@ MoMo_92
@ KillJoySynner
@ Queen of Obscene
@ fallen_angel94
@ Chelsea's Dead Smile
@ Savior of Gallifrey
@ MoMo_92
@ MyPrematureBurial
@ Rosenrot;October 30th, 2016 at 08:36pm -
@ jessiocstories
sounds good dude
October 18th, 2016 at 07:09pm -
@ SkaterGirl.
I've got two chapters rewritten and I'm working on more! Yay! As soon as it's up to par I'll repost. :)October 17th, 2016 at 11:21pm -
that sounds good too
October 17th, 2016 at 07:04pm -
@ SkaterGirl.
Thank you so much!
However, I am actually in the process of reworking it.. It needs a little TLC.October 17th, 2016 at 02:32am -
this is goooodOctober 16th, 2016 at 10:42pm
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@ MoMo_92
Thanks. I just feel like I can do better so I'm about half way through the revamp, lol.October 6th, 2016 at 06:02pm -
Love itOctober 6th, 2016 at 04:45pm
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I am very happy to announce that Tortured Soul is being completely rewritten! My writing style has changed so much since this story and I'll admit that it does need some work, lol. I love the Underworld series so much and because of that...I think it needs another chance. I've heard you're many requests to continue this and I would love to...just as soon as I revamp it and give it the love and time it needs. :) I'd also like to inform you all that there WILL be a Raze story! Yay! It's been a super popular request and I'm working very hard on it! If you have anything you'd like to happen in this revamp or in the Raze story please don't be shy! Let me know and I'll see if I can create something magical from it! I hope everyone has a magical day and thanks for always reading!
@ KillJoySynner
@ Queen of Obscene
@ fallen_angel94September 27th, 2016 at 02:57am -
I am very happy to announce that Tortured Soul is being completely rewritten! My writing style has changed so much since this story and I'll admit that it does need some work, lol. I love the Underworld series so much and because of that...I think it needs another chance. I've heard you're many requests to continue this and I would love to...just as soon as I revamp it and give it the love and time it needs. :) I'd also like to inform you all that there WILL be a Raze story! Yay! It's been a super popular request and I'm working very hard on it! If you have anything you'd like to happen in this revamp or in the Raze story please don't be shy! Let me know and I'll see if I can create something magical from it! I hope everyone has a magical day and thanks for always reading!
@ Chelsea's Dead Smile
@ Savior of Gallifrey
@ MoMo_92
@ MyPrematureBurial
@ Rosenrot;September 27th, 2016 at 02:57am -
My thoughts? Start from the base idea. It's interesting, but you need to put DETAILS into it. What she looks like, what causes her to finally speak, how did Raze come to see her as his daughter, when did Lucian first become attracted to her - you're missing a LOT of points here.
Honestly, at chapter 2 I thought the story was over - it was like "Murder", She Wrote when I got to it. She need to give her SOMETHING of a back story that will keep your readers interested..., and you need to work on your sex scene writing as well.
Those are my thoughts.September 6th, 2014 at 07:59am -
Not that I can think of.June 21st, 2014 at 08:25pm
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@ Savior of Gallifrey
Alright. Anything else?June 21st, 2014 at 08:23pm
thank you!