@ The Doctor's Wife I'm actually really surprised I got a comment on this. I was just kinda fooling around writing this since I had a fiction section for Creative Writing last year but I've been debating on continuing it so I might in a little of time since I've been really thinking of where it could go and it would give me a release and help keep me interested in writing. Thanks!
Interesting start, I'm getting into this already :D You could space out the speech so that it'd be easier to read and a little more detail, but other than that I love it :)
I'm actually really surprised I got a comment on this. I was just kinda fooling around writing this since I had a fiction section for Creative Writing last year but I've been debating on continuing it so I might in a little of time since I've been really thinking of where it could go and it would give me a release and help keep me interested in writing. Thanks!