Love in Chains - Comments

awwwwwwwwww poor brian but i loved it and it was hot and i cant think of anything else

I love how you're telling it from Brian's point of view rather than the girls, it makes a nice change and in a way, makes the girl slightly more mysterious. I always find that if it's written in the first person, then the partner that's not doing the narrative is always quite the enigma! I loved the ending, it gave it so much more of a plot rather than just being a one-shot full of smut. I could defiantly see a story coming out of this!

I loved it. I was in tension while reading. It felt just right to read every detail of what he was thinking and feeling. I specially loved the way you described at the end that she was the one lusting him instead of the other way around like we mostly read in other stories. You have a great plot and this will be awesome to read in a full sequel story. Awesome job! And thank you so much for entering.

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