Rotten - Comments

This is very poetic and very deep. I quite like it.

And I must admit, it made me think of phoenixes. You explode into ash every single day, and then are reborn from those ashes. Forced to go through it all over again.

Beautiful.

okay, well this is fantastic. I love how you worked with the poem and turned it into something more. excellent work my dear.

First of all, I'm really diggin' the layout and second, I really enjoyed the first entry.

"There is fire in my veins. It licks at every corner of my body, my soul, my mind. I'm not just smoldering, I'm burning."

For some reason, I really like that line! Haha. Can't wait to see where this goes!