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Haylie Jaed
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This is very poetic and very deep. I quite like it.
And I must admit, it made me think of phoenixes. You explode into ash every single day, and then are reborn from those ashes. Forced to go through it all over again.
Beautiful.
December 12th, 2012 at 08:22am
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okay, well this is fantastic. I love how you worked with the poem and turned it into something more. excellent work my dear.
December 12th, 2012 at 05:37am
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First of all, I'm really diggin' the layout and second, I really enjoyed the first entry.
"There is fire in my veins. It licks at every corner of my body, my soul, my mind. I'm not just smoldering, I'm burning."
For some reason, I really like that line! Haha. Can't wait to see where this goes!
December 12th, 2012 at 01:06am
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And I must admit, it made me think of phoenixes. You explode into ash every single day, and then are reborn from those ashes. Forced to go through it all over again.
Beautiful.