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@ Loki's Lotus
Thank you! :) I have fixed the layout to make it easier to read. I didn't mean to leave all the end in italics, I messed up with the italic tags. It's fixed now :)

I like the layout. It's great and from what I've read thus far it fits the story quite well. I even enjoyed the quote in the summary. However, I had to switch to the default layout in order to read it properly. The lines aren't spaced far enough apart.

It was very well written, aside from a few grammatical mistakes, but we won't worry about that. I knew what you meant. Anyways, it flowed well, but at times seemed a bit rushed. Near the end I realized you were jumping from past to present quite a bit, but left all of it in italics. That kind of made it hard to discern which was which. Over all though, I am intrigued. I wanna know what's going on with Chris and what is real, what the voices are saying or his wife. It's crazy because I feel as if Anna is the dream and he really is in a coma. Of course I could be wrong, but I guess I won't find out till I have read more. I guess this calls for a subscription and recc.

I really like this, I've subscribed and recommended, I really want to read more. I only have one fault with this story, the writing is too small and I had to copy and paste it into word so I could read it, please update soon as I really want to read more :)