Yes, I'm pumped! This is so good already and it's just getting better. I do feel like they've been trapped on the roof for over a month, but that's just me :D Update soon!
I sooo love this story! I've been reading it before but I think I've been a silent commenter until now! Liam was absolutely precious with Tay's ankle in the pool scene! I think that was one of my favs! And Brenna and Darcy's fight was so sad :( I wish the firls could get along!
OOOHMYGOD. OK, so one of the authors was a Mibbian of the Week, and that's how I found this fanfiction.
Anyways, I am so in love with this story. I love all the girls, they are well written, though my favorite has to be Ellie. Mainly because I can relate to her character, mostly by her personality. And I feel that I know more about her background than the other girls. Also, I'm a bit iffy about Darcy, probably because she appears to be the opposite of Ellie. Haha.
I wish I could say more about the story, but I'm not really good at story comments. Anyways, I have recommended and subscribed!
ANNND OANFKAFHA, I probably wouldn't forgive Louis, if it was in real life, but since this is happening to a character... I want her to forgive him. xD Good job girls, I can't wait to read more!!
Can one of you maybe send me a picture of what van you see them traveling in? ... 'cause I want to make a banner.
I think that I'd forgive him. 'Cause he seems like one of those people that isn't serious that often, and when he is, you KNOW he means it. I loved that update.
Completely random but has anyone ever noticed that Louis has a funny expression on his face in the banner? Like was that ment to be that way when the picture was taken for teen vogue? Still is handsome
I mean ... he cheated. And that's horrible. But, I have to say I'm weak enough that if he did that and said that ... heck yeah I'd take him back. One look into those blue eyes and I'd be a total goner. Great chapter!
I absolutely loved that update! Poor Healey. And the song you wrote was beautiful! I can imagine the melody.. so I'm kind of wondering if I was right haha.
the songs are really well written! i saw that you wrote the second one, and i was wondering did you write a melody? i can easily imagine the pausing and space in it, so great job!
also, why would zayn do that?! i hope he doesn't actually have a girlfriend, and they've recently broken up but that's not public yet or something. i REALLY hope that! :(
I started reading the lyrics to the first song and I was like "I know this but..." and then I kept reading and I was like SMASH!!! and then I felt really proud of myself. It's pretty shit to think about how he has a girlfriend and kisses her anyways. I would freaking hate that situation.
i feel like brenna and niall could have something. always getting left behind despite how hard they try to show concern for the person they like. They could bond! Maybe if Niall goes to talk to her when he finds out that she's the reason Darcy's crying, he would to talk to her to ask her what happened, and then Brenna would start to cry because she always feels second best to her best friend. Niall would TOTALLY help her feel better too! <3 He's such a sweetheart!!!
I do wonder if the guys called dibs themselves, and Niall had chosen Darcy and Harry stepped in anyway. Then him and Brenna would REALLY know how each other feel!! xD
i agree with the last comment!! i do prefer harry with brenna, but i don't necessarily think they'd be good together. it'd be too awkward now. before though, there was a possibility!
so, i'm a new reader, and i'm loving it! i dunno why louis would have set that date up if he had a girlfriend. there's just no way that he could set that up without thinking about his other elle, you know?
and i'm SUPER HAPPY that liam and taylor are fixing things. xD