Begin Again - Comments

  • wishful;

    wishful; (100)

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    Before anything else I would just like to talk about this line ..his expert fingers continued their assault on her... THIS. I just...that line...the assault bit...it amuses my young immature teen self hehhee. Anyways, Lea, my dear love, thank you thank you thank you! <3 This is my very first smut one-shot and it was great! Spilling coffee on Zach thing is always a good ol' classic when meeting someone in stories huh? If it wasn't clarified that Mikey would be my wonderful lover then I'd be pursuing after Zachary. Ahah back on task, your writing has improved babe - I can see it :) The fact that my relationship with the douchebag was already over when Mikey and I met...YES. Up the meter by 23984732894738924 times :3 And also when we'd just met and I was already wet from looking at his face just after meeting him jfbskjfbkfkjf ahahahhaha :') THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU.

    Btw, is this TS? I mean, the title? :3
    November 21st, 2012 at 06:04am
  • teenage hearts

    teenage hearts (100)

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    Urgh I should be commenting on my other acc so I will rave about this after school...
    November 20th, 2012 at 10:10pm