Sorry in advance if this comment isn't 100% coherent, but I won't let myself sleep until I'd read and commented on this. I'll keep it short though. This is AWESOME! I want to rave about how good it is, really, I read it all in one sitting. You're a great writer. And the fact that this story has AU, Christian elements, and a protagonist of color seriously makes it even better!! Keep up the amazing job!
Ah fine writing on Mibba. I love it so. Combining the intricate ingredients of love, hockey, and the supernatural. You, my friend, would make the perfect Burish pie. Hmm. Pie. Alec has some serious potential too. Give him someone feisty! But.... this made me miss hockey. So thanks for trying to quiet some of the discomfort I feel from this loss.