Prom - Comments

I like this. please keep going! ;x

It's a short beginning but it sounds really interesting. The layour is simple but pretty and the story seems like it's going to be good as well. The way it's written gives it a really good voice and the character of Lani seems interesting as well as her relationship with Jamie and the description of the past they had together is really sweet. The only mistake I found was 'Am I falling through an endless black hole.' which should have a question mark at the end or changed to 'I am falling' if it's a statement :) But overall it's good :)