Miss Masquerade - Comments

Comment Swap: I like this. Lol. It seems funny, she tricks the bodyguards xD. Totally genius, and she of course disguises herself. Please update soon, I would love to read more of this upcoming story. (:

haha, not too much to go on right now, but I will say that as a first character it was amusing and comical, not giving too much away, but the switching of the flights was pretty funny. It has potential to be a really good story. There was only one mistake I spotted with using present and past tense, but other than that, great writing. Keep it up.