Trouble - Comments

Omg! Best 1D story ever! xD

HERE WE GO LAST CHAPTER OMGGGGG. *deep breath*

AW IT'S LIAM NO BVGTFUYOIPK:JYUGFTR*UIOPJOKLBHVGCFTRDET%FH&YUI

Noooooooo stop talking about prison :'(

No LIAM DONT GO Gah.

I hate you.

Hate you.

HATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUU

Sorry not sorry. Even though it is more realistic.

But I hate you.

..........But what else could she have done?? Like shot him in the leg instead?

fvhuoaisdnchvufoaeihiu THAT'S SO COLD. Whhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Da fudge?

DA FUDGE DID YOU DO THAT TO ME.

I still hate you.

Hahahahahahahahaha >.<

Yes. He is the dickiest dick. Although YOU MADE HIM DO IT. -_-

No. I am no longer interested. You have ruined me with this story. Hahahahaha JUST KIDDING.

Anyways........to tie everything up, you are beautiful, and I aahhh-bviouslyy DO NOT hate you. Heehee. And the amount of time and effort you put into this story clearly showed the whole way through. I think that this story had the best plot, and the best character development, and a smooth flow the entire way. I would have to say that I think it's your best story so far. :)

Wowzers. I have three whole chapters to catch up on hereeeee...so I'm just going to do live commentingon the last chapter. And I will probably faint........

THAT'S IT THIS IS MY FUCKING THIRD TIME COMMENTING AND I CAN'T DO IT ANYMORE. I'VE TRIED BUT THE INTERNET KEEPS CUTTING OFF. AND I CANT TRY ANYMORE. UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

THIS WAS AMAZING. OKAY. LIAM WAS BEING A MAZZIVE PAYNE IN THE ASS BEING ALL INSENSITIVE AND SHIT LIKE THAT SAYING SHE'S A MURDERER. UGHG UGGHGUGUHGUHGGHUGHUGH.

thats it, im just gonna leave gifs to explain my feelings..cause i cant write to save my life rght now.





sometimes with liam...






and last, but not least...THEIR SHIP






i swear to god....this computer...keeps messing up...ughhhhhhhhhhhhh. I'll try giving a much more meaningful comment when it isn't messing up. THESE GIFS DON'T DO JUSTICE TO THIS ABSOLUTELY, ULTIMATELY, UNDOUTEDLY STUNNING STORY OF YOURS. OKAY.

JFC WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME I NEARLY DIED.

Omygod. Girl, I'm pretty sure you've killed me at least 10 times with this story. I just had a heart attack, I swear. Like... Really. I was *this* close to slapping Liam upside the head and yelling at him so loud that he wouldn't be able to hear for days. Thats just not cool, bro. Don't do that to Sol!!

Ugh. But I have to admit..... That was kinda funny. xD Her reaction after he told her that he wasn't serious.... Omg, I died laughing. i agree with Sol, Li's a dick.. But at least he's a cute dick.. Well, I just kinda called his dick cute.. awkward.. Oh well.

Anyway. I can't believe this is over. I just can't.. God, I'm gonna miss Soledad and Liam and CLaudia and Esperanza and Marisol and Alejo so much.. I just dunno.. I've gotten addicted to them, and I'm tearing up right now cause I don't want them to leave. :( But anyways, at least I don't have to say goodbye to you! I've already subscribed and recommended all your other stories. :)

As always, this chapter was absolutely amazing. I don't even have the words to describe its amazingness. Or yours.

I love youuuuuuuuuu<33
~Mariah

At first, I was all... "You go, sista, you did what's right, so thank him and get your butt out of there!! Be the Katniss that Katniss was supposed to be!!" But then, like.. A few sentences into Liam's spiel, I was like... "KATE... Wait a second.. They're gonna be together.. Kate loves Soledad too much..." Hahah!! And I have already subbed and recced your upcoming stories

Fucking fuck yeah you're going to get cursed out a lot! I just cried my fucking soul out because I thought that the real, natural, and probable ended had just occurred. Lets save that for the real world yeah? Fuck.

I loved the ending! I was getting annoyed with Liam being so judgmental in the beginning, but then it turned out he was just joking, which I thought was a great twist. I was starting to think that they wouldn't end up together because Sol's life just seems to go that way, but she got her happy ending. This story was amazing, I am so glad that I came across it.

it's hilarious that you're writing a story about Harry and a stripper when I just read that he got a lap dance from a stripper for his birthday hahaha anyways such a great chapter, so good.

If I didn't love you for the end of the chapter I'd hate you for the beginning. You seriously had me going there for a moment. This was fantastic and, like I've said before, I can't wait to read your new stories. :)

Holy moly poly roly !!! I wasn't sad but felt bad for Sol that shed continue to be alone (even though I know she can handle it) sshe does deserve to be happy for once. Also the fact that they "broke up". Kinda allows Liam to be a normal person with them. Yaay! Newww stories!!

la de da de da

i'm filling up space so that if anyone has the "Show Comments" section up, they don't see spoilers.

If every time we to-uh-uh-uc-h, you get this kind of ru-uh-ush, baby say yea-e-e-yea-e-e-yea-uh yea-e-e-yea-e-e-yeah. If you don't wanna take it slow, and you just wanna take me home, baby say yea-e-e-yea-e-e-yea-uh so come on girl and let me kiss you!!!

okay that outta be enough space.

I GUESSED RIGHT EFF YEAH MOTHER EFFER!!!!
I legit was getting upset during the beginning of the chapter. I was like "Liam you mother poop dick sucker! Stop being so judgmental, you know what she's been through!" but I was also like "He has a point...she could have shot his leg and then blackmailed him into faking his own death." I'm just glad that he gets to be with her!!! I was uber sad to hear that 1D broke up, but I mean, we haven't really seen the guys during the entire story, so I'm not that heartbroken for this universe. And I really like how he was effing with Sol the entire time. I believed him. Glad that wasn't the case though!!! xD

This story was beautiful!!! <3 <3 So heart-wrenching, but soooo mother freakin good! Thank you again for being such a brilliant writer and creating these scenarios that make our heads spin in wonderful directions!! This has been such a blast <333

friiiiiiiiiiiiick man, i am so proud of esperanza. she has learned so much, and she's done so well.

how could their mother not know what happened with sol and cristobal? i'm sure the whole town would know and someone would have told her. and if she had a month i'm sure she could have come up with the actual reasoning that they did it, because they do care for her! she's got to know that. :( if that's the worst that happened, that's fine. their mom was barely in the picture.

if we're sticking with the realistic vibe that you've got going, liam has got himself a mother freaking girlfriend. he's sweet, gorgeous, and probably under the impression that soledad is staying in jail for the rest of her life. it's been two years, he's got to be at least dating someone. i'm sure that taking care of the girls would have taken up a considerable amount of time, but that'd take half a year. a few visits every month or so doesn't do much to take out of his life. then there is band stuff, where he could be busy touring to not have time to get a girlfriend. buuut, in real life he's got a girlfriend now. he can easily meet a girl anywhere in the world and live with her. he's got the money to travel from england to america to wherever she is, and then some. he is a catch and there are a lot of catches out there who would love to be with liam payne. unless he's JUST gotten out of a relationship, or he's been dating unsuccessfully, he has to have a girlfriend. my vote is for the dating unsuccessfully!! (;

itssofckingannoyintypingonthislaptopsobegratefuljustiddingiloveyou.

I don't know if it's the brightness of the screen (which I doubt since all light is on and it's not blinding) or the story, but I've got fricken tears in my eyes. You have absolutely no idea what emotions are boilin inside of me and it seems stupid since this is just a fic - screw those judgmental people - but this is definitely my favourite story of yours. No lies.

This chapter...I can't...it's just no possible. HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO MY SENSITIVITY!?

I couldn't imagine how Sol felt finally getting some fresh air. Argh freaking argh. WHEN HE HUGGED HER IM JSTLIKE YUSSSS BEST OF FRAAANDS, BITCHES. Alejo...everything that has to do with that beauty of a boy (or should I say man, now) is just sweet and hilarious. I still can't believe he's gay, like NO, I wanted him. But I'm happy for him and Robert. Urgh, Alejo just has this thing about him and they were laughing and goood. .

UGH EZPERANZA. I'm so proud of her (obviously not as proud as Sol) and ugh, she's stepped in and just took care of everyone. "I'm proud to call you my older sister." Criiieees an criiiesss. Marisol is just the most precious thing..ugh..I loved her from the start. Haha Liam finding out about Claudia....haahaa.

I reeealllyy should've had more faith in Liam but...but...I'M SORREH LIAAMMM. I can't believe I actually thought he was afraid and didn't do it. Part of it was Alejo's fault - damn. But ugh I CAN'T WAIT TIL THEY MET AGAIN.

CAN YOU JUST IMAGINE THEIR CONVERSATION AND THE WORDS, POSSIBLE HUGGING AND KISSING. UGH UGHGUGH.

I'm so happy that Liam helped the girls out so much, they definitely would not be in a good place if he didn't step in. I'm glad that Esperanza stepped up and took care of her sisters, I wasn't sure if she had it in her. Now Esperanza knows how Sol felt and what it took for her to try and raise the girls, which I think will help their relationship tremendously. I can't wait for Sol to see Liam again!

Oh Sol. Back to not understanding emotions.
Godspeed to Liam then. Rebreaking down the walls.
I knew he wouldn't leave themmmmm~
Good boy!

I hate when I delete an entire comment. -_-
I knew that Liam would have stepped up and I'm glad to see Esp has matured with the responsibility. I can't wait until they see each other! Yikes
Can't believe this is. Reaally over -_-
You are wonderful

Oh Liam!