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  • Hayleyisbored

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    @ NobodyCares
    That's so cool! I bet you're thinking of better scenarios than I am! aha. And I really should thank you, and the other guys who comment, because if I never had the feedback from you then I'd have probably slowly stopped updating because I wouldn't have thought it was worth posting up anymore. So THAAAAAANK YOOOOOU! :)
    June 12th, 2013 at 12:23am
  • NobodyCares

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    @ Hayleyisbored
    I read a lot of stories here on mibba, but this is one of the few that I actually care about. When I first thought about Danielle becoming a zombie I was in bed and almost asleep, but then the thought struck me and suddenly I was wide awake and all I could do was just lying there and thinking about everything that could happen in this story. I am on that point where I'm going all fangirl every time something special happens. Don't thank me, I should thank you for writing this!
    June 11th, 2013 at 11:23pm
  • Hayleyisbored

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    @ NobodyCares
    And I love how much you love this story! As cliche as it sounds, I'm really grateful that you take the time to read something I've written because I never think that what I do is mind-blowing and I know I'm not the world's greatest writer - it's just amazing to me that you like it enough to take the time to comment about it, so thank you!
    June 11th, 2013 at 11:18pm
  • NobodyCares

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    I have actually been thinking about this lately, normally you will become a zombie if one bites you so the possibility of Danielle becoming the same as Charlie now is possible. Isn't it? I am kind of hoping for that. If he can't get back to normal it would be perfect if Danielle turned into the same as him. God, I just love this story a lot, it's so amazing!
    June 11th, 2013 at 10:37am
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    @ Hayleyisbored
    good. cause I'm not sure my poor little heart can take it. D:
    June 9th, 2013 at 09:49pm
  • Hayleyisbored

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    @ stallion duck.
    Aha, unfortunately no - it never does :( I swear, the next story I write will be so happy and comical!
    June 9th, 2013 at 06:46pm
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    The good never lasts, does it?
    June 9th, 2013 at 12:19am
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    I'm so happy this chapter ended on a lighter note.
    May 31st, 2013 at 01:28am
  • KillerRed27

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    Yay a good kiss. No biting. I'm glad she didnt run. Update soon
    May 30th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • Harley91594

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    We got to meet Matt, yay! This was a beautiful chapter, Danielle is such a sweetheart for being so understanding.
    May 30th, 2013 at 01:49am
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    Oh no.
    May 28th, 2013 at 11:02pm
  • KillerRed27

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    Wow that was nuts I woulda run out the door screaming. What's happening to him its like he's becoming the zombie that he really is. This story is really good. Update soon. Shes so brave and I can't believe she's so sweet and nice after that.
    May 28th, 2013 at 10:17pm
  • NobodyCares

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    That was really beautiful and absolutely adorable. Definitely the best chapter yet, I really liked everything that happened between Charlie and Danielle. The kiss, the bite, the conversation and all the emotions. This story is amazing!
    May 27th, 2013 at 06:37pm
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    @ Harley91594
    I think we all need a little more Arthur aha. As for his boyfriend, we'll see... :)
    May 27th, 2013 at 11:45am
  • Harley91594

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    Poor Charlie, it makes me sad that he is feeling so hopeless. He needs a little more of Arthur in his life. Will we ever meet Arthur's boyfriend?
    May 27th, 2013 at 06:23am
  • NobodyCares

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    Oh no! I think she's a bitch right now, she may be angry with him but that's just going too far. Poor Charlie! I am kind of scared that now he will just turn out like a real zombie, because he don't have anyone to keep him human.
    May 25th, 2013 at 11:21am
  • KillerRed27

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    wow, I can't believe she said that to him. That was so mean. But he kinda deserves it for playing with her emotions like he is. Update soon Please!!!!! Very Happy
    May 25th, 2013 at 09:32am
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    @ KillerRed27
    Thank you! I'll probably update within the next week or so :) Thanks for reading!
    May 16th, 2013 at 11:20pm
  • KillerRed27

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    Wow I'm really liking this story. The concept behind the it is awesome. Update soon Mr. Green Mr. Green
    May 14th, 2013 at 05:03am
  • NobodyCares

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    Oh my god. Ohmygodohmygodohmygod. I am seriously going to die if he actually ends up as a real zombie. It would be a cool twist, but it's so sad. I love Charlie, he deserves better!
    May 11th, 2013 at 10:36am