Lovely Kisses - Comments

hephaestus (1155)

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@ Fandango
Good, because I promise update more frequently!

March 6th, 2013 at 10:19pm

Fandango (775)

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So excited to see where this goes

March 6th, 2013 at 07:36pm

hephaestus (1155)

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@ NothinNNomore
No, Dennis's kids are younger than Preston.
One's in high school, the other is in elementary. I'll tell you that much.

March 6th, 2013 at 05:28am

NothinNNomore (100)

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I'm so nervous for this story to continue! I can only imagine if Dennis' kid is like his classmate or something. AWKWARD.

March 6th, 2013 at 04:26am

wish on a firefly (885)

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This is a really wonderful start, Jojo! :D I actually love Preston and his potential lover (I say potential since they're not together yet

) and you have a way with words! <3 I can't wait to read more!

February 23rd, 2013 at 03:53pm

Elephant PJs (365)

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This is so..enticing. Everything about it. One of the best first chapters I've read on here actually.
Your style is beautiful, clear, and the description isn't overwhelming but adds to the narrative exactly as it should.

Yeah, I really like it so far