L-O-V-E - Comments

this is amazing! I actually feel like I'm there when reading this. Your a brilliant writer. I hope you do an epilogue (:

Amazing! Your words made this such a loving and tender bit to read. Wish you'd continue this!

I subscribed just in case you do decide to make an epilogue 'cause this is amazing. Haha. :)

Ah, wow! This was a brilliant one-shot. I do think that the word choice/adjectives were a bit excessive, almost as though you had a thesaurus nearby. But that's just my personal opinion, and I tend to like simplicity! Other than that small thing, as I said, brilliant! I would absolutely love to see an epilogue to this.