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  • izzycomeonuknowthis

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    @ Chelsea's Dead Smile
    well i'm glad you liked it :) and yeah i could of done a lot more with this story i just kind of lost touch with the vibe :/ but i thought it would be nice to at least finish it :) so i did :D also at the moment i'm writing a story you may like, called 'Lust Mayhem And Love' check it out <3
    November 29th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    This story had such potential! Something could have happened to Michael or Jake could have broken up with Ella to be with Michael, because of some weird shtick!
    November 29th, 2012 at 12:06am
  • NegroLeo

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    I guess I no longer have to inact my anger on his father. Good chapter by the way!
    November 19th, 2012 at 03:26pm
  • NegroLeo

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    OH MY GOD! Anger! FURY! Good chapter but want to destroy his father!!!!!!!
    November 15th, 2012 at 08:30pm
  • NegroLeo

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    No problem!
    November 15th, 2012 at 05:37pm
  • izzycomeonuknowthis

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    @ NegroLeo
    haha okay, and thanks <3
    November 15th, 2012 at 03:17pm
  • NegroLeo

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    You should definitely write more!
    November 15th, 2012 at 03:13pm
  • NegroLeo

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    I like it, it's just different from what I normally read.
    November 15th, 2012 at 03:10pm
  • izzycomeonuknowthis

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    @ NegroLeo
    ??? you like? or hate?
    sorry, really need to know if i should continue the story :/
    November 15th, 2012 at 02:44pm
  • NegroLeo

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    Uh wow.
    November 15th, 2012 at 02:34pm
  • leia543

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    interesting.... write more
    November 14th, 2012 at 07:57pm
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