This is seriously fantastic. I mean one direction and Harry potter, I never even thought about how awesome these two would be, and of course it's written really well, so it's even better! Update soon! I absolutely love it!
This is such a different plot!! I've necer read something like this before!!! :) It's AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gaaah!! But at the same time, I'm not into Harry Potter stories with OCs, I'm into ones with pairings that aren't canon and have characters that already exist but this is amazing!!
I love the idea behind this story! Its going to be amazing...and I would also like to point out that the Matched series is seriously amazing...and I'm such a book nerd that that little detail makes me like your story even more even though it will probably only be for that scene...oh well the story was amazing enough anyway!! :)