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  • mlelyn

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    thank you so much ! I'm glad you like it. :)
    November 16th, 2012 at 02:11am
  • FrozenFrozenFrozen.

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    AHHH! I really, really liked some of the wording you used for this story! For example; Vile little thing, flustered, menacing, plow, hellacious, introvert, extraordinarily, etc! This is a wonderful start you have on this story and I can't wait to read more!
    November 15th, 2012 at 11:07pm
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