The Lucky One - Comments

I love this! They are so cute! Please update soon and I'm excited for the sequel xx

Wonderful thing to come back to! Great updates, hun, keep up the work! <3 excited for the sequel!

Update soon
Great chapter

How cute.. Brian is being all romantic...loved the update

awww poor Jen...glad she is better though :) and how cute of brian being all romantic!! cant wait for more!! and im really excited there is going to be a sequel :D

omg that is so cute :D Brian is so adorable and sweet and great :D and the way he took care of her :D so beautiful :) I want to read more :D

This is so addictive! I can't wait for their date. Brian is so romantic. Please update again soon xx

wow... loved the update... and I can't wait to see what happens next...

especially with the way this ended.... I want more and now... but since i got these really close together... I suppose I can wait.

This story is kind of addicting

xoxo Sweet Afterlife xoxo

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Depp as in... Johnny fucking Depp?
That sexy piece of ass?
The one that doesn't look his age?
Ooooooo drama...

I have one thing to say... HOLY SHIT!!!

More...

Now....

i cant wait for more i really love this you are a great writer :)

Great chapter
Update soon
Her last name is Depp? Like Johnny Depp?
Can't wait see what happens

Michelle deserved that slap....nuff said

I can kinda understand why Jenna would want to do things on her own and not use her father's name, but I hope that it doesn't bite her on the ass. Hopefully Brian will let her explain and not fly off the handle.

On the other hand, if Michelle does try anything her father can basically send her to hell. He's got a hell of lot more money and influence than that skank.

Why would she lie about that? I'm not sure if Brian is gonna believe her at first. I hope he isn't mad at her when he does believe her. I usually don't like dising on the wives but Michelle is being a bitch

Michelle is really a bitch, what is she going to do? Whatever it is I hope she would fail. Plus, if Jenna is Johnny's Depp, Michelle is much less famous than him so she is going to be mad at her!

Please don't let that ruin them!!!

Yeah so I hate Michelle!!!! I hope she doesn't fulfil her evil plans :( can't wait for more :)

Wait, Depp?? As in Johnny Depp?

What's Michelle gonna do? Please update again soon cos I can't wait to find out!

wtf is Michelle going to do?? I think everything can go against her. She cheated on him, and they were witnesses, and I'm pretty sure Val is gonna take Jens side. And on top of that, she abandoned the twins. So I think she can't talk. And Brian is so sweet and adorable :D He's the best :D Update soon :D