Concentrate - Comments

This story pains me honestly. :( I hate how Erik is such a master manipulator without caring.

Flashbacks were great, good to see some of the relationships develop not only in the present but also the past. Glad to see this story back up and running, look forward to reading more!

Gosh, you've captured Erik perfectly!!! I'm so greedy I want Robin/Erik all the time! Amazing writting can't wait for more!!

Slow but good chapter! I still want to punch Erik... lol but I LOVE this story so much and I love how careful and calculating Robin tries to be.

I love how Robin has matured and isnt easily manipulated by Erik anymore and she holds her own ground now!

AHhhhhhhh that was awesome!!! Can't wait for the next one! I still want to punch Eric in the face.

Ughhh he's persuading her like he did Raven; I don't like it and I don't like him. Lol I'm nervous about her feeding so much into what he says; it's obvious ten years didn't do exactly enough to get him off her mind.

Damn Erik and his persuasiveness! Loved the update, still bumme about Sean, but I love the twist due to the hate Robin has for trask now. Can't wait for more!

I hate Eric... Ugh. Plain and simple. And I can't believe... Sean's dead =[ So sad!!! I don't blame her for being so upset that the whole plane went invisible.

Another great update. It's sad that they knew about Sean and never told her. Can't wait for more of this, loving the tension between robin and Erik!

OMG SHE MADE THE PLANE INVISIBLE? This story just keeps getting better and better!

So glad to see this story back in action! Quicksilver was one of my favorite parts if the new movie love how you added robin to the mix. More soon!

I love the ending and how you portrayed Quicksilver! I cant wait for erik to realise robin is there!

Absolutely LOVE your writing, so so so incredible. I totally binged on reading this all night. I love Robin so much!!! Keep up the fantastic work!

I was SO excited when I saw you update this!!! I ADORE this story, seriously and Logan, mmmm I love me some Logan. Gah this chapter was great, I really can't wait for more!

IM SOO EXCITED I LOVE THISS UPDATE SOON PLEASE

Oh wow, okay so I just read this whole thing up until now and I read the last chapter and I was like wait... there HAS to be more! So I'm really stoked to keep reading this because it is the BEST X-Men fic I've ever read, hands down.

This story is really exciting. Excited to read where the character's find themselves. Hopefully a reunion. I miss them together. Great story.

Thanks for the update! Can't wait to see how your character is going to fit into the days of future past story line

amazing! cant wait for more!