May 20th, 2008 at 05:31am
There is a lot of dialouge....maybe you should explain the surroundings more. Every chapter shouldnt just be practically dialouge.
good plot. just too much dialouge
Crimson Red Rush - Comments
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May 16th, 2008 at 06:12pm
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I WANT THAT WEDDING!May 16th, 2008 at 05:33am
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not the end?!
sad that it's over...
loved it thoughMay 13th, 2008 at 03:28am -
i love it!!
their getting married! !May 12th, 2008 at 05:18pm -
lol
loved itMay 12th, 2008 at 12:37pm -
So.....you have been teasing us with all of these interupted sex scenes with Ville. When are we gonna get the whole thing? Lol! :DMay 12th, 2008 at 06:02am
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... she is leading them on.. i hope she chooses ville...........May 11th, 2008 at 03:13pm
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Fuckin right!- bloodravyn:
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like charlie has any room to talk
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yeah...
like charlie has any room to talkMay 11th, 2008 at 03:19am -
I love itttt :]
Im addicted to this story I think...
More soon pweaseee?
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I love the last part it made me laugh. I could just see to skinny guys thinking they are the rock going at each other. lol. Update soon please?!May 10th, 2008 at 10:20pm
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LOVED!May 10th, 2008 at 08:09am
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back together!! yay! :D
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back together!! yay! :D
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That was funny!!! Char and Bam are back woo!!May 9th, 2008 at 05:05am
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lol
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bam and charlie make me smile.. :DMay 8th, 2008 at 10:07pm
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great update!! more soon?May 8th, 2008 at 09:12am
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loved itMay 8th, 2008 at 06:16am
more???