Monsters - Comments

Wow. I love this story

O.o Damn! Awesome chapter darlin! I really want an update and see where this fight is going to go. I feel like Niall is going to come before Harry or Liam even kill each other. Update soon! <3 <3

This update was SO SO SO SO SO AMAZING!!!!

I WAS RIGHT! YES GO ME!
Oh my god! My whole brain is screaming I don't know what to do?!? HARRY DON'T DO RAPE. RAPE IS BAD!
WHERE IN THE NAME OF GOD IS MY SNOWFLAKE?!?! NIALLLLLLL.
Liam :D <3

Ovaries ruined
And I want a werewolf Harry :(
What the hell ?!? Liam?!? What happened to Niall being a worry!!
Is Harry going to get hurt? I really hope not :(
Update soon!!!

God Damn! Why do I find that such a turn on? Curse my stupid ovaries....

You are killing me, everything hurts reading this cause I mean come on!!
My dreams will be pleasant
I wanna say I'm worried about niall but you ruined my ovaries

So good!! Damn Harry should I be turned on or scared? Anyways such a good chapter and what up with Niall where did he go D: And loverboy? Hmmm Liam or Niall? Could it be Liam? Update fast I'm dying here :D <3

This is bloody amazing!!!
I love how you have written this chapter because I can feel the cold weather as if I'm right there in the story. Wolves are the most beautiful creatures of the night. I really am excited to see what will happen next.
Great update seriously :-)

So far so good(:

This is an interesting story and love the idea for it, your writing style and skills are great. Niall is always attractive and so is Liam :) I love the supernatural theme you have going on so I'm already in love with this story. My only suggestion is to separate the paragraphs from dialogue.

Ex: "Niall,"I called out and looked back up to find him gone.There wasn't a trace of him anywhere.I couldn't see a damn thing through this snow though.My eyes widened and I sat up so quick I felt a little dizzy.Where the hell did he go?I felt frustated and angry,but more importantly was scared because Niall was gone.

This is what it should look like:

"Niall,"I called out and looked back up to find him gone.

There wasn't a trace of him anywhere.I couldn't see a damn thing through this snow though.My eyes widened and I sat up so quick I felt a little dizzy.Where the hell did he go?I felt frustated and angry,but more importantly was scared because Niall was gone.

Also to read your writing out loud, it helps make sure that your work make sense to you so it makes sense with the reader. I hope I wasn't too harsh because I'm just trying to be helpful.

Can't wait for the next update. YAY for nearly being done with your Senior year, I am as well :)

So far it seems amazing!