Last Girl Standing - Comments

PS Jenna is a hoe bag

FUCK YOU ZAYN OKAY? FUCK YOU. THAT WAS MEAN. APOLOGIZE.

douche

But really OMG why'd he do that?! Oh Harry save her from evil zayn he's just not nice but zayn and abelia need to get married and I'm so torn ughhh

Update please

This comment makes no sense.

omg my comment looks so ridiculously long.

omg my comment looks so ridiculously long.

Not entirely fond of Jenna. Mostly for the throwing-herself-at-Zayn in chapter 3 kind of already being a two-faced bitch towards Abelia.
I was about to complain about how there's a corresponding number of points-of-view and boys so we know all of them are going to end up with someone, but there aren't and that makes me really really happy on the inside. Almost as happy as the idea of one of the boys actually falling for someone in the crew instead of a contestant.

I'm not sure how I feel about Sadie playing the field so much, but it's good that she's not getting too attached. Kind of wondering why Harry so quickly said he didn't have chemistry with the first girl.

October's chances really depend on Liam and Louis, unless Harry or Niall get over her reaction. (I already ship Abelia with Zayn so he's not an option, eheh)

I wish we got to see some of the other interviews with the other girls and not just October's. Or that their bio had the quick description of themselves that they put on the paper that the boys had to match to their face! That would be excellent.

My brain is trying to match the girls and their names right now... (I've done a fair amount of consulting the characters page and chapters now)

Kassandra intrigues me. She's definitely going to have some sort of plot line with Liam. Not sure about the endgame of that plot line, but there will be plot.

I'm not entirely sure who I'd put Hayley with besides anyone but Niall.

Whoever wrote the elimination scene didn't have Harry nominate 4 girls as outlined in the second chapter.

I wish we had more character bios for the other girls (even the ones who don't get their own point of views) just because it'd be easier for me to manage the people in my head. Partially because I'm confused as to how many contestants there are.
Let me know if you need pictures because I have a gross amount that I've saved up over time for banner making, the "Girls" section of "use for banners" has folders for: Backlit, Black, Brown, Blonde, More than one person in a photo, Red, Misc/dyed., and vintage actresses. I've got you covered.
Back when I used to make banners anyways, I feel like most authors just get their friends to make them/make them themselves now

Sorry that I'm not sorry that this is a long ass comment.

SWEET BABY JESUS I JUST CLOSED THIS TAB AND I WAS AFRAID THE ENTIRE COMMENT DISAPPEARED AND I WAS GOING TO SCREAM SO FREAKING LOUD YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW.

Jenna, I think he liked Abelia first! SO DON'T BE SO HAPPY.

i don't think she did a bad thing by helping out abelia go to niall. i mean, there can only be one girl per guy, so in the end i know the boys will choose who they want.
great update.

I love this story so much, which I am sure you know since I say that after every chapter :) But I love how Liam is so insightful in his response to October's personality! :)

Love this story and I had a feeling that Jenna was a bitch at first and now she is alright but a part of me thinks her bad side is going to come out. I can't wait for the next chapter because Abelia is my favorite and I want to see her and zayn talk but I just know Jenna is going to be a problem. Zayn might have to end up choosing between the two of them. Go team Abelia!

i'm not that big of a 1d fan..but this is just amazing! I LOVE IT!

...they're soo... harsh.. omg.. they're soo harsh...

GO LIAM GO! STICK IT TO THE MAN! That's why you're Daddy. All the other boys are PEASANTS.

jk they're beautiful. But Liam. Just so perceptive. *sigh*

YEAH LIAM, YOU TELL THEM.

I agree with Juno; I think that was uncalled for on the boy's part. If she says that her parents were harsh on her (implying that she's had it rough), don't act all surprised when she get's defensive because you're prodding her for more >.<<br />
Great chapter! ^.^ I love this story!

I really want Abelia and Zayn to end up together and Sadie and Louis. I love this story, and it has become one of my favorites very quickly. I'm very excited for the next chapter!

well i would've done the same thing if i was october.
i mean, piss off boys, she went through a lot.
maybe sit down in private one on one with her.
duh.

THIS STORY IS AWESOME!! MORE PLEASE!!

awww niall, you irish lad you.

Niall is the cutest! Waiting for more:)

i'm laughing so hard right now, Niall is so clumsy lol