Well Played - Comments

OMG, this was so amazing!!

Although, now I really want to read The Outsiders again... :(

Ah, now I understand the meaning behind the title. I'm not gonna lie and say that it'll be better if you make this story longer, because I personally like how this ends.

This is a perfect read for those who wants chaptered stories and yet wouldn't want to be tied down for long.

Splendid ending to a splendid story. I can't think of any other way how this story will end.

That bitch!!!
Good thing you ended it because I want to kill her! Nobody plays zayn...nobody.

Okay, now I understand why that was the last chapter.
I don't necessarily like the ending and I want to give zayn a hug because that whore messed with his feelings :'(
However you're writing was one again amazingly perfectly flawless, and it was probably actually the perfect way to end a short story.
However, I hope you know that in my head, Zayn finds a girl in the end and they live happily ever after.
I can't wait until you write another outsiders related story, because with this talent it would be a shame if you didn't write another one :)

WHAT? DID IT JUST END? Just... WHAT.

Okay, I'm going to do an Outsiders story.

Um what just happened? G O D I can't believe Rose. Ugh! And props for Zayn for being strong. Damn I really wasn't expecting it end like that.
Its sad it ended buuuuut I L O V E D I T!

My jaw dropped when I read this. I can't believe it's over. NOOO! It can't be! Ugh. But it was so bloody fantastic that... iwkendjvoaienvkd. no words. I can't even! Poor Zayn. HUGS TO HIM!

Oh my gosh, that made me so angry.
I don't like Rose, even if she was a version of Zayn.
WHYWHYWHY, I'm having feels, like sad feels because of what could've been.

I must say, another flawless chapter, and an ending I wasn't expecting.
Really, good job on that. I will definitely re-read this story in the future because I loved it that much.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful short story.

Whaaaaat!!! I loved the ending. I did not see that coming at all. Oh man. This was an awesome story! You are amazing.

I hated the ending! :/ even though it was freaking amazing :)

Ummm... I love this.... Like A LOT! Zayn as a greaser is the BEST! Rose is cool too... Lol.

How could you only write one more chapter?
This story deserves more than that, and you only just started it :(

Once again, another flawless chapter.
I like that the relationship between Rose and Zayn is building, and it could go either way now. The description was amazing, and gosh, I just love it. You writing is clean, and your sentences flow.

Like notweirdbutunique said, I thought you were kidding when you said a six chapter story because everything just started, but if it's meant to be a short story, then that's absolutely fine because it's still a flawless story.

I'm excited for the last chapter. I want to read what happens.
:)

I thought you were kidding when you said that you're making this a six-chaptered story.

I WAS WRONG.

B-But the action's only starting...

one more chapter?! no! i feel like this is just getting started, don't end it now they've finally gotten somewhere!

only one more chapter?
Y U NO MAKE MORE?!
=]
i love this so much.

Oh, my lord! I can't take this story! I'm so happy that it's almost over, because my heart can't take it. I need to know what's next! Eep!

One more chapter! :/ I seriously love this and am going to miss this story!

Can't wait for the next one! :)

Y E S! And they kiss c;
aww only one more chapter )': its gonna be good!
I can't wait! Ahhh.

Ahahaha poor Steve.
I just love this. It was a cute chapter.
Just Asdfghjkl; amazing! (: