Try Not to Lose Yourself - Comments

Ace Lightning. (100)

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this story's like 2 yrs old haha but i still love it!!!!! n____________n

November 10th, 2014 at 07:23am

Make the Voices Stop (125)

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This story deserves more recommendations >.>

October 14th, 2013 at 08:56pm

fiction246 (100)

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Awww I love this!!! I almost wish there was more but the ending is perfect :)

January 26th, 2013 at 02:52pm

YouCan'tKillHeroes (100)

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This was great! I loved the last chapter, it totally made me smile(:

November 23rd, 2012 at 05:09am

matthuee. (100)

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;_; That was perfect oh my goD. Really great short story, and the ending was beautiful. I seriously look up to you as a writer.

November 22nd, 2012 at 06:05am

Unexpected. (100)

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Awe, this was perfect (:
Especially that last chapter. I liked how you skipped the sex. It fit perfect.

November 22nd, 2012 at 03:18am

eric halvorsen (100)

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erlguhaerogha THEY'RE SO SWEET TOGETHER. I love it.

November 22nd, 2012 at 02:50am

SmallWonders (100)

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This is beautiful. The originality of it, the way it was written. I absolutely love it :}

November 22nd, 2012 at 01:46am

Make the Voices Stop (125)

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Please update soon :) As I have said before .. I'm obsessed haha :)

November 21st, 2012 at 04:31am

SmallWonders (100)

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Oh gosh I actually teared up a bit there at the end :} it's sooo good.

November 21st, 2012 at 02:53am

matthuee. (100)

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Oh god. I was about to break down crying because of Elliot but Conner still loves him so it's all good in the hood and wow.

November 20th, 2012 at 07:30am

Justlovetohate (100)

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this is really good so far can't wait for more

November 20th, 2012 at 02:10am

Justlovetohate (100)

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this is really good so far can't wait for more

November 20th, 2012 at 02:10am

Make the Voices Stop (125)

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Can you pretty please update o.o I think I'm obsessed with this story :3

November 20th, 2012 at 01:20am

SmallWonders (100)

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This. Is. Awesome.
Totally origninal and very very well written ^_^ I can't wait for the next two

November 19th, 2012 at 09:09pm

eric halvorsen (100)

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I really like this, I like how they're opposites but they fit together so well. I do want to punch Elliot for having sex with some other guy, but ahh, it's just really good.

November 19th, 2012 at 08:48pm

Unexpected. (100)

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I like this, but of course I do. I always do. :)
I'm very interested in what will happen next!

November 19th, 2012 at 05:40pm

YouCan'tKillHeroes (100)

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I do like it! Can't wait for the next update(:

November 18th, 2012 at 07:25am