Fifty Dollar Nose Bleed - Comments

Your writing style is interesting and after reading a couple paragraphs I actually really enjoyed it. There are a few parts that could be cleaned up a bit, just to make it a little easier to understand. All in all, I might've just gotten a little confused because I'm not all too familiar with Panic's band members.

Your writing style is interesting and after reading a couple paragraphs I actually really enjoyed it. There are a few parts that could be cleaned up a bit, just to make it a little easier to understand. All in all, I might've just gotten a little confused because I'm not all too familiar with Panic's band members.

Well that was certainly...interesting. I have never come across a writing style like that. And honestly, I didn't like it. I felt like there was random things happening and there was not detail to back it up. And if anything Ryan deserves to get punched for doing that to Brendan, both in this story and in real life. But I won't progress into real life music politics.

@ lifeisprettyodd
Oooooh I'm excited:)

@ cups.
Wow, thank you for the kind words :) and this was only supposed to be a oneshot, but I have more ryan/brendon fics planned!

This was ridiculously sweet, even though I was worried for a minute there

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This was good. No, make that amazing. I like the way you write honestly, it's clean, crisp, and simple which is personally what I like best! I didn't understand why he punched him though, but maybe I just missed a few words. And anyways, good story'. I'll be back around this story to see of you've updated.