Kill or Be Killed - Comments

tribute.victor. (100)

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*murdering her off

May 1st, 2014 at 06:34am

tribute.victor. (100)

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*murdering her off

May 1st, 2014 at 06:34am

tribute.victor. (100)

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Comment swap.
So, I personally haven't read the graphic novel or watched the show but I get the general concept and of course I know who Daryl is. I like your writing a lot! Your a natural, honestly! And I love all the little details.
Daryl and Rachel's relationship is really charming and seems legit. It's not cheesy or Mary Sue which is always a thing with this kind of FIC. I've only read the first chapter but I hope he finds her!! And no murine ring her off! ;)

May 1st, 2014 at 06:34am

grayson; (100)

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Oh my shadows! I totally forgot to comment on this story when I read it the first time. Sorry. (: Anyways I love how the story is going and the relationship between Daryl and Rach. Keep it up!

November 3rd, 2013 at 09:32pm

Snow.White.Queen. (100)

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Comment Swap.

Well I haven't seen The Walking Dead but I hear it's excellent and after reading your story i might just have to go and watch a few episodes! Although I don't watch it I didn't get lost with your plot or anything, so kudos for that. I like how you've developed your story with care and quite slowly too, which is always good. I like the relationships in this, they're real and relateable, not over done or too full on. I like the layout too, it's easy to read, simple and clean cut so good marks for that! One thing I would say though is that there is too much dialogue in this for me, I mean the first chapter especially, I would have liked some more content and background information before the speech jumped in completely. But in saying that I still like this so good work!

October 31st, 2013 at 07:49pm

jennifer96 (100)

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love this story and the relationship between them, keep updating please :)

October 30th, 2013 at 10:42am

itsparamshayall (100)

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Daryls so protective. Its really cute.
Im glad you updated again :)

February 26th, 2013 at 03:34am

Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

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It thrills me to see Daryl so protective over
her. It just goes to show he reallu does have
feelings.

February 25th, 2013 at 11:02pm

vinur1996 (100)

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Please update soon! :)

February 10th, 2013 at 02:16am

Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

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This is by far my favorite Daryl Dixon story.
I'm completely honest, I promise. :)

Please update soon! I'm bursting with excitement
to know the rest of this story.

<3

February 6th, 2013 at 05:20am