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  • tribute.victor.

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    *murdering her off
    May 1st, 2014 at 06:34am
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    *murdering her off
    May 1st, 2014 at 06:34am
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    So, I personally haven't read the graphic novel or watched the show but I get the general concept and of course I know who Daryl is. I like your writing a lot! Your a natural, honestly! And I love all the little details.
    Daryl and Rachel's relationship is really charming and seems legit. It's not cheesy or Mary Sue which is always a thing with this kind of FIC. I've only read the first chapter but I hope he finds her!! And no murine ring her off! ;)
    May 1st, 2014 at 06:34am
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    Oh my shadows! I totally forgot to comment on this story when I read it the first time. Sorry. (: Anyways I love how the story is going and the relationship between Daryl and Rach. Keep it up!
    November 3rd, 2013 at 09:32pm
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    Well I haven't seen The Walking Dead but I hear it's excellent and after reading your story i might just have to go and watch a few episodes! Although I don't watch it I didn't get lost with your plot or anything, so kudos for that. I like how you've developed your story with care and quite slowly too, which is always good. I like the relationships in this, they're real and relateable, not over done or too full on. I like the layout too, it's easy to read, simple and clean cut so good marks for that! One thing I would say though is that there is too much dialogue in this for me, I mean the first chapter especially, I would have liked some more content and background information before the speech jumped in completely. But in saying that I still like this so good work!
    October 31st, 2013 at 07:49pm
  • jennifer96

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    love this story and the relationship between them, keep updating please :)
    October 30th, 2013 at 10:42am
  • itsparamshayall

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    Daryls so protective. Its really cute.
    Im glad you updated again :)
    February 26th, 2013 at 03:34am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    It thrills me to see Daryl so protective over
    her. It just goes to show he reallu does have
    feelings.
    February 25th, 2013 at 11:02pm
  • vinur1996

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    Please update soon! :)
    February 10th, 2013 at 02:16am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    This is by far my favorite Daryl Dixon story.
    I'm completely honest, I promise. :)

    Please update soon! I'm bursting with excitement
    to know the rest of this story.

    <3
    February 6th, 2013 at 05:20am
  • WeeCookiexD

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    Love it so far, please update soon :)
    December 29th, 2012 at 04:40pm
  • foreversmiling2198

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    Love it, I subscribed can't wait for an update. Merry Christmas<3
    December 25th, 2012 at 04:42am
  • basket case

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    This is great! :))
    December 23rd, 2012 at 02:07pm
  • RoadieEm

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    Nice backstory. I liked it.
    December 23rd, 2012 at 01:41pm
  • sillyfrancais

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    I really like this :) Please update!
    December 14th, 2012 at 09:41pm
  • RoadieEm

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    HOLY CRAP!
    December 14th, 2012 at 09:34pm
  • AshaGirl

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    Update soon ppllleeeaaasseeeee
    December 10th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • RoadieEm

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    So yeah... I totally squee'd at the end. o.O
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:48pm
  • heyJAYhey

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    love love love love this story :DD
    December 10th, 2012 at 02:14pm
  • basket case

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    I really, really love this story. You don't even understanddddddd! <3
    December 2nd, 2012 at 03:32am
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