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  • SkyTheSniper

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    Ok thx
    November 18th, 2012 at 06:02pm
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    I really like this so far. :) You should work on sentence structure, though. There are a lot of run-ons.
    November 18th, 2012 at 04:50pm
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    thx :D
    November 18th, 2012 at 07:17am
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    I love it :D
    November 18th, 2012 at 07:16am
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