Caught in the Crossfire - Comments

WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU KILLING EVERYBODY OFF?!?!?!?!?!

WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU KILLING EVERYBODY OFF?!?!?!?!?!

I can already tell this is literally perfection xx <3

Oh man! It's about to go down!

Oh my lanta I love that action scene! Harry just swoops out of no where to save the day, just like the hero he is! I love how snarky he is and very in your face. He reminds me of Tony Stark hehe! It was so cute how Liam didn't know what to do and he was just lik o_0 and he just wanted to help! Poor guy! I love this story!

Get well soon Katie <3 Mibba loves you!

i love this story so much<3

Liam is too precious in this! I want one.
I want a Harry, too.
I've got a fire, if you know what I mean
bahahahaha. Great chapter!

well then!
I was going to say something along the lines of "one of my close friends is dating her older brothers best friend" but now I see that it's not needed.
I kind of feel bad for the brother though because they've now been dating for four years and he totally knows that his best friend is sleeping with his sister.
poor boy.

OH MY! That chapter was quite steamy at the end! I'm excited for more!

bahaha
I'd like to point out that the league also contains extraordinary women.

Finally the group is starting to get together! Can't wait for more!!

Aww icky sicky.
I like that she has the reflex to want to run away

grr.
The characters page still says that Penelope's Harry's sidekick

Louis is just too cute in this chapter! I'd want to take care of him, too. I'm fascinated by Wren. I want to know more of her story and why she runs to Louis only to want to run away. I'm confused and intrigued but I like it. All of the characters are so interesting and it's a really compelling plot. I'm excited to see what happens next!

I love Penelope and Liam so much. I like all the characters but there's something especially cute about them and now I'm dying to know what his plan is.
This is a really great story, different and intriguing.
Can't wait for more!

I really hope Oakley can convince Zayn to join! As for Harry and Ashton, I really don't know what's going to happen with that mess. Maybe Harry will change his mind?

Poor Zayn.

Just finished chapter one, I think there was a "no/on" mixup but looking over that tiny typo I'm excited. Well. I'm excited with the typo too, but you know what I mean. I hope...
Let's be honest: we all only know the term "cumulonimbus clouds" because of the movie Up

It was sooo good Maddi. You're the best.

The update was fantastic! Can't wait for more!