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me and my friend are crying right now...... WHY ARE WE SO DRAMATIC! *sob*

This is heartbreaking beautiful. I like the way you wrote it a lot. It's filled with so much emotion and it just all flows very naturally and wonderfully. I love the overwhelming sense of regret in this piece and how she realises she made one of the biggest mistakes of her life but can't fix it. I wish she would've made more of an effort for him since she clearly still loves him, but I also think he's been so hurt by her rejection that he wouldn't let her back in.

I don't know why you said you're horrible at writing stories because this is a stunning one-shot filled and it's very poignant as well.

I liked it. The layout was lovely and really added to the story.

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I feel bad for her though, wanting to take that last action and not being able too...

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I like how you incorporate the song, but not to much. You did a really good job of that.

@ Infinity and Beyond;
Aw, babe ! I think your story is wonderful c: <3
My story sucks >:o! I will be reading every story you have >:33
*evil*

@ oh but darling
yes, yes. but mine is terrible compared to yours, now dont read them >;( ;p

Why am I stalking you e_e? Am I freaking you out ? (Probably)
BUT I KNEW IT! I KNEW YOU HAD A STORY >:D

I love this story! Even though it's only a one-shot. I thought it was great. :)

@ blueyellowandgreen
I don't know. ._. And, thanks I'll fix it in a minute.

SERIOUSLY? Why didn't Louis come after her. I feel like sobbing now. Also the 'they' at the beginning is a 'the 'right?

I really liked that, sometimes I don't like when short stories relate so heavily to the song but you worked it really well and it was really good. I enjoyed it!