She's Not Afraid - Comments

  • Bree0909

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    Are you going to put anymore chapters
    February 1st, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    YES. Oh my God, I actually let out a cheer when Two-Bit clocked Danny. Sorry not sorry.

    I love how they're all so embarrassed or turned on by the fact that Sadie's in a towel. Hormonal teenage boys... *sigh*

    OOOOOO, TWO-BITTTT. Hahaha. Very forward of him. ;) I knew there must have been a reason he was the first to defend Sadie. YES. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens. :D
    December 8th, 2012 at 11:47pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    This chapter was really good. There was one spot where it switched to present tense, though, so careful of that. Hahaha.

    But oooo...I'm so sad that happened to her. :( That's disgusting, and she's so strong for getting through it. And I think it's good and very true to Ponyboy's character that she confided in him. He's the most likely to listen. :)
    November 26th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    AWW. I AM SO FLATTERED. YOU ARE TOO CUTE. THANK YOU FOR DEDICATING THE STORY TO ME, YOU WONDERFUL HUMAN BEING.

    As for the story, I really like it so far. I like how you set it up and everything, and I think the reason for her returning to Tulsa, to the Curtis house, is pretty realistic. And Two-Bit nearly killing Sadie with a hug...I can totally see that happening. Love it. :D

    I can't wait to read more!
    November 19th, 2012 at 10:52pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    AHH. I'm excited for this. There are a couple typos in the summary, though, so I'd just check that again. ;)

    I'm so pumped for the chapters to start getting published. YAY.

    And I love the look of Sadie. :D
    November 18th, 2012 at 11:45pm