You Were Mine - Comments

This story is absolutely one of the nicest ones I've read so far. It was very well-written and the ending seemed all so realistic. I loved Niall and Adalyn and I wished I could have seen more of them but then we all know how it ended. There weren't any grammar mistakes or typos which is great. I also love the figurative language. This is definitely a lovely story and a worthwhile read. :)

Oh goodness wow that was absolute perfection! Your writing style is gorgeous without being too descriptive or too gaudy. Absolutely flawless. You can tell a story with such grace and it'sbeautiful. :)

Oh my lord. That was just amazing. Words cannot describe how wonderful that was. aslkdjasldkj. I absolutely loved and just GAH. Yes. Congratulations on winning the contest, you really did deserve it!

AHH!! Congrats on winning! This story was amazing and you truly deserved it! (:

Firstly, the layout is absolutely gorgeous. Secondly, holy crap, this was absolutely precious. I was sucked in from the very first sentence, falling for Adalyn and Niall's relationship straight off the bat. This was very well written and the way the song has been incorporated is genius. This is the first entry that I've read that has made me feel strong emotion, particularly at the end when Adalyn revealed her feelings for Niall. This was absolutely lovely, and thanks for entering my contest!

Oh my GOD. This was so djlfsdfkjdfkj and I'm just so dfgmdfgkldg... I can't right now. This was so, so, so great! I thought the ending was going to be all sappy and make me cry, but it didn't and I'm glad because those two don't deserve a sad ending.

And can I just take a moment to dance for joy because Adalyn told Niall that she loves him?! I nearly cried when I read that.

Please do an epilogue.

Lord have mercy, that was beautiful! Please write an epilogue

Be right back. Eating my feelings.

Oh good God. Niall and Adalyn are just too KDJFDSLKJFLDKS for words. This was so beautiful and your writing was fantastic. I didn't want it to end but I liked the ending. I liked that they had closure and that he wrote a song for her so I'm not sure how I'd feel about a continuation (although once you post it, I will probably fall in love with it too). But, this was just perf. Good luck in the contest! (:

I'm just gonna keep repeating AWWWWWWW NIALL in all my comments because that's how I feel rn. That was such a good and realistic ending. Nothing sappy and cheesy BUT JUST SO CUTE. Niall <3
this was amazing okay kristina
I was gonna say update soon BUT MAYBE NOT. What is this epilogue you mentioned???? :)

Awwww. I'm sure Adalyn will learn what love is and how it feels. This is just too adorable

Oh my Lord, this chapter was great! It makes me so upset that Adalyn had never had anyone previous to Niall tell her that they loved her. That is just a disgrace. But at least she had Niall to tell it to her every day.

AWWWWW NIALL! I don't know why but I lol'd at the "Jesus Christ Almighty" part. When people say that...lol. And what people say Sweet Baby Jesus...
ANYWAYS, I cant get over HOW ADORABLE NIALL IS. Ugh. Update soon so I can just die again :3

This is just too (another word for cute inserted here)! I love how sassy Adalyn is and how sweet and vulnerable Niall is. You don't see that often in fanfics. He's usually just this crazy Irishman jumping around about Nando's. Love it (:

This is the best Niall fanfic on this site right now. You portray Niall in such a vulnerable way without overdoing it. I absolutely love this story

Niall and Adalyn are so cute together. I love how she reminded him that he doesn't have to try so hard because she likes him just the way he is; very cute. And I love how she got along with the rest of the boys. She's so perfect. As are you, for writing such an amazing story.

Niall is just too cute for words. This chapter was adorable. I love how she got along so well with the rest of them. The parts with Zayn and Harry especially were just so cute.
UPDATE SOON! :)

This is so perfect! The layout is perfect, your writing is perfect, Niall is perfect, Adalyn is perfect...everything is just perfect. You need to update this soon because I need to experience more of this perfection!

omg okay 1. this layout is gorg
2. THAT NIALL GIF THO
and 3. This song is great

and omg precious Niall and badass Adalyn
LOLHARRY WHEN HE WINKED AT NIALL. HE'S SO CUTE.
and she's so straightforward. I wish I was like that. I mean, she got to kiss Niall. I want to kiss Niall. Or Zayn.
but this is really good! update soooon! :)