Oh man Zayn gotz lots of splaining to dooo! Haha. But great chapter I like that there was more insight into the whole thing and I hope she listens to her mom and goes back to Louis honestly!
And I have read A Doll's House and I have to say I agree that it is a parallel to it somehow! Weird haha I just hope she doesn't end up walking out x_x
Wow... i can't believe Zayn knew, should I be mad? anyways, YAY, I'm am so sure that she's going back to Louis. Now I guess the Sequel title makes sense.
I don't think that Laurel is intentionally trying to be a bitch. She thinks she's doing a favor to Louis by stepping out of the picture so he can have kids. The problem is that Louis isn't having it. He loves kids, but he loves her more.
I don't think they'll go through with the divorce. It's too predictable to have a divorce happen and then a sequel where they get back together. Maybe Liam's pep talk got to her. *fingers crossed*
Liam's outburst was brilliant!!!! but I still say that Laurel should get her head out of her ass and go back to Louis! They need to work this out! update soon please?
I still firmly believe that the divorce must go through because I am still angry with Laurel. I also see this as the most logical course of action in terms of the rest of the plot, however I do realise that there are more chapters to come and therefore this could change.
I still firmly believe that the divorce must go through because I am still angry with Laurel. I also see this as the most logical course of action in terms of the rest of the plot, however I do realise that there are more chapters to come and therefore this could change.
hahaha, look at all the comment below me! (except any bad ones that don't agree to getting Laurel and Louis together) don't you ever get the idea getting laurel together with someone else. and I love Infinity and Beyond's comment, I would of have said everything she said. if they divorce I would want to see them get married again in the sequel.
God Laurel needs to stop felling sorry for herself and try to fix things with Louis. They love each other so the should be together. Love the story cannot wait for the sequel!!!
MY JAW ALMOST DROPPED WHEN I READ LIAM'S LITTLE SPEECH THING. THIS CHAPTER WAS GREAT. But Laurel has to get back with Louis , it's a must. Great story!!
Liam is so my favourite person right now. Laurel absolutely deserved all of that. She is being selfish and inconsiderate; she's just given up rather than trying to work things out. But, I can see where if she got some help, that she and Louis could still work it out. I'd definitely like to see them together in the end.
WHAT NO NO NO, plase don't, please don't! They need to end together! I'm mad at Laurel but so what! I WANT THEM TOGETHER. I think Laurel deserved that speech from Liam. I think that was negative comment, but it doesn't mean I don't want them together!
Now please hurry up and update so you don't change your mind. ((((:
wait maybe... they could divorce and then in the sequel the get married again at the ending.
I don't know, but at the end of everything, they are ending together.
Okay, so at first I really wanted Louis and Laurel to work their shit out and get back together, but she's being such a bitch that I really want the divorce to go through and then you could write a sequel where Louis finds someone who actually deserves him. I get that it would suck to be in her position, but I'm just sick of her right now!
But seriously, this story is really good. It's one of the better ones that I've found on this site.
Sad Louie makes me sad haha. Laurel seriously needs to just quit with this divorce thing and get back together with him. They have the money to do surrogacy.
I really don't like sad Louis! He makes me sad. So I really hope the other direction you want to take the story in is happy! Laurel just needs a smack in the head. She loves Louis - just admit it! Update soon!