To The End - Comments

Hey there, I'm her from comment swap
First of all.. how dare you- this was beautiful and it managed to rip the stitches off my heart- I don't really read MCR fanfics because well they make me sad so be glad I read this because when. I found out that Gerard died I did too! I really love that its well written and it does have a good ending

I loved this!
1. this was well written
2. the ending was adorable!
3. and the personalities are really well written!
I loved the ending to the story, it was very cute, and very uplifting. I loved it. it was beautiful in a very strange way.

I'm here from comment swap!!

I'm not usually into these sort of Fanfictions. They just aren't my cup of tea. But this was really well written and I loved how you portrayed the personalities. When Gerad died I was actually really surprised, and how you wrote that a part was really good. The ending was adorable, it made me smile uncontrollably! Keep it up! You are a GREAT writer!!!

@ eminems_stan93
Thanks ^_^ Ill definetly try a layout but i always seem to have troubles making one XD

comment swap. Couple of I's not in capitals, I noticed but to me that doesn't really matter. I'm not one to read MCR fanfics, but I love them as a band anyhow. This was... really sad :( I think you could definately make this longer, that would be cool. I dind't like how Gerad died, broke my little heart in two and I actually got teary. That's what great writers do, make the reader feel. I love this, also, a layout would be cool I can imagine a nice less sad looking one because at the end this story is uplifting. < 3

@ blades
And im sorry i broke your heart X)

@ blades
Well thanks! That means alot, and i really could have made it longer, but it didnt really come to mind when i was writing it XD

oh wow, that was really sad :( I normally don't read MCR fic but I really enjoyed this. you were perfectly descriptive - not too many words but also not too few, a really good balance of both. I think you could have turned this even to a full blown story, because I think there's enough there with your characters that I really want to know more! the ending absolutely broke my heart. good job.

haha thats fine. Pretty much Gerard found out he was going to die anyways and decided he didnt want to suffer anymore. So thats why he did that. And im sorry i broke your heart XD

Oh my god. Really? That was sad. It broke my heart reading that. Those poor boys. Okay so Gerard was sick and he killed himself? Did I understand that right? Sorry, that's the only part I found confusing. And if he did, then he's a coward in my opinion. If not, the disregard my stupidity lol.

@ wonderyear?
That really makes me happy that you think that even though you have no idea who the characters are x3 And you are the second person to say that about it needing to be more... So i might actually consider it! :3

@ Death the Angel
Wow thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I worked really hard on this one so it means alot to me that you said that! :)

okay first let me day th I don't know who any of these people are in this fanfic. not really my thing. I really did like this though, more than I thought I would. It was so sad though T_T I feel like it should be more than a one shot as well. really great

Comment swapping:
I really liked how descriptive you were in this one-shot, it painted a clear picture for me and I could see Gerard and Frank saying and doing the action clearly as well.
This one-shot was emotional and well thought out, it was a real tear jerker as well. Good job :)

Haha im sorry!! XD

Wow that was really intense hit so close to home

Wow thanks! :D

i dont normally read ferad because i dont particularly like that type of music but this is deserves to be more than just a one shot and i have a little puppy wanting to get on my lap hahabut anyways please i wanna see this story progess more you have real potential in this story i can feel it

:3 Thanks Ana, love you darling.