You're Kinda Sexy When You Get Angry - Comments

This is so adorable! I love the Baekyeol moments and that slight awkwardness between Tao and Kris.

comment swap. I don't really know who these people are and I didn't know it was a fanfic until I read others comments. The layout is neat, and your writing isn't half bad. A suggestion is to proofread through it to take out the fragments in your sentences and then you should be good.

Hey hey comment swap time!!

Awww this is very cute, i have herd of this show and i do watch yaoi from time to time. But i have never actually seen this show before. So this is sorta not like a fanfic but an actual story for me but it's still very cute and well written so good job!

This is a very generic comment left on a story I was sent to by comment swap yet didn't want to read because I have absolutely in interest in it after reading the summary. Please excuse this comment for it is being used to get comments on my own story. Sorry for the trouble in you having to read this bullshit.

This is a very generic comment left on a story I was sent to by comment swap yet didn't want to read because I have absolutely in interest in it after reading the summary. Please excuse this comment.

LITERALLY CAN'T BECAUSE OF BAEKYEOL.

But omg this story made Taoris move up on my otp list. I really loved seeing their relationship evolve like it did. I'm happy it ended perfectly but also sad because it's over in general but I just loved it a lot!

I love the idea so much. You don't make it cliche at all and it's great :) and ahhh, I love gay men- It's-- I have gay couples in basically all of my stories. :D

I love the idea so much. You don't make it cliche at all and it's great :) and ahhh, I love gay men- It's-- I have gay couples in basically all of my stories. :D

Oh gosh, Kris and Tao are perfect. I'm glad Kris wasn't just like 'no gtfo'. I couldn't help but smile at the Taoris because it was really sweet this chapter and I'm also glad Tao told him about the stealing (I mean he really didn't have a choice but you know). I also loved the Baekyeol in this. I was squealing about the thought of Chan feeding Baek yogurt and ruffling his hair. Plus their eavesdropping was hilarious.

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I used to watch the english sub of this a long time ago!

About your fanfic though, the first few sentences instantly caught my attention! You certainly know how to start a story that's for sure. You had no trouble garnering my attention.

As for the first person pov, I read alot of fanfics that have trouble in first person, jumping from present to past tense but you didn't have that problem.

I also enjoyed the wit of the story. You've made me want to rewatch the drama.

I know the layout has nothing to do with the writing itself but it was crisp and clean, easy on the eyes and made it easier to read.

I literally can't handle the Baekyeol in this. They are the perfect comic relief and everything they say and do makes me laugh my head off.

But, I'm so glad that Tao and Kris are like a thing now omg. I thought the restaurant part was actually pretty sweet and I was smiling like an idiot while I read all of that. OH and don't apologize for the length. It was perfect! :D

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Right off the bat I have to mention the layout. I love that it’s clean and crisp, and the color scheme works nicely. No complaints from me on that one.

Tao’s theft as an opener was great. From the summary I figured Tao would be this sweet, good kid, getting his goals through honest work, but the fact that he’s not adds wonderful dynamic to this. I’m not sure I really understand Kris. He almost seems like he’s just putting up the rich boy front, which could be equally interesting. And I must say, I loved love LOVED the pun war. If only I were that witty, good lordy. That was a really good way to get them to put the shoe grudge aside. Nicely done, ma’am.

I'm honestly enjoying this. My friend is a big fan of "Boys Over Flowers" and she recommended it to me a while ago. Funny how I jumped on this instead, hahaha.

But in all honesty, you should continue. I'm happy the comment swap recommended this to me.

Oh my god the Lion Kings puns were literally the best things ever. I can't even tell you how hard I laughed. And then the whole beginning with Chanyeol and Baekhyun playing that board game. More laughter ensued. This is absolutely fantastic.

Going to be totally honest.

I am treating this as an original fic.

And since I'm treating it as an original fic, it's really good. I don't read much slash because it had this tendency to be poorly written smut, but this is awesome. Tao is funny, and Kris pisses me off, but chemistry between the two is believable. I'm glad that I got this for comment swap; keep up the awesome work.

I DO NOT EVEN KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN.
Between bad boy Tao and stuck up Kris and dumb Chanyeol and then Baekhyun holding his hand I just can not. And then the banner I just can't. I love this so far like a lot.