In Orbit - Comments

I accidentally (not really) read your forum conversation and I'm really sad to see this story go!! You girls are all amazing writers and I absolutely loved the story. I really loved what had been made and I hope to read some of the stuff you each do in the future:)

Excellent! An update!
There were two typos rapped instead of raped (made it much less dramatic) and thin instead of think
Aw. Zayniepoo.
Where do they live anyways?

oh my god. i love it. at first i was like One direction and greasers...ehhhhh. but nope I loved it. You proved me wrong. :)

I'm imploding at what happened to Rahne, though I noticed that there were no mentions of her necklace being ruined so that's something. Louis's being a dumbass to Eileen, but surely you can see my ish-rant below.
Marilyn is probably my favorite but that's not entirely surprising. I mean they're all close for first but I mean. I really don't know where I was going with that. So far I like her plotline best. I feel like Samson's story is about to get more interesting though.... also I want to see more of Rahne and basically I just want updates forever. I'm not saying that I support violence or anything but I hope Rex gets stabbed in the face and I think I know someone willing to do that *coughzayncough*

DAMMIT KATE.
I CAN TELL IT WAS YOU BECAUSE NO ONE CAN INFURIATE ME LIKE YOU DO. I mean. I may be shit at keeping authors and characters matched, but I managed to remember as soon as I read the end of chapter 16.
fucking "We interrupt this romance with a bit of disappointment."
Fuckssake. I'm glad I'm not near a wall I can kick because I need my foot in good condition for my dance class because that'll be the only part of me in good condition because for a girl so thin I'm ridiculously out of shape

I'm on chapter 14 and I'm going to have a better comment after I've finished catching all the way up but I was just thinking about how I wanted to use the term "in orbit" now and then I realized "there are no boys that I'm interested in/interested in me" and now I'm just going to sulk and continue reading.

OMG I DIDN'T EVEN READ THE LIAM CHAPTER. WHAAAAT.

I like how nicely the story is coming together! Not to sound rude, but my initial impression was that this was just one of those fluffy stories full of fillers and nonsense. But i see a plot coming together and I'm loving it. I'm super worried about the girls, though. so many feels for this story, guhhh

Write more soon!

FUCK. I thought this was gonna be the chapter when Louleen would finally happen! Boo. :( I still loved it though. So good. I like how you portray both of her personalities, the Soc and the greaser. She's very dynamic and I think she might be my favorite character next to Rahne. :)

So many feels. This story is amazing. :) I'm in love with all of the characters and the way you've stringed all of this together so well. I really can't wait to see what you guys have in store for this. x

“I’m sorry, but I can’t.”

OMG MY DISAPPOINTMENT UGH GOTDAMN IT LOUIS

aww this wad perfecf

“Because I’m trouble and I don’t deserve a girl like you, Marilyn,” he said, his breath warm against my skin. “And if I kiss you, I’m just gonna want to do it again. And I just know I’m only gonna hurt you in the end. You’re like one of them fancy little statues. Beautiful and priceless, but fragile. And Doll, I ain’t never met a statue I didn’t break.”

omg Liam. swoon.
I'm so in love with story, every single girl, every single pairing, every bit of it. so great.

oh.my.friggen.goodness.
i am in love with this story. this is amazing. i love how each of the characters have their own personality and how they are so stereotypical like the rest of the 1D fanfiction. i love the story line, i love the dialogue i just love ALL OF IT. please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon(: its rare that i find a story that is worth commenting on. This is fabulous(:

Aaaaawww!!! They kissed!!!

omg RAHNE OMG PLEASE LET ME HOLD YOU OMG YOU'RE A BRAVE MOTHERFUCKER HOLY SHIT SO MANY FEELINGS.
gawsh.

Marilyn's a fucking beaut okay? she's so precious and OHMYLIAM MY FEELS FOR LIAM OMG. Still loving all the work you guys put into this :) I can't wait for the next update.

REX BETTER NOT TOUCH ANYONE I'LL FREAKING FLIP MY FLIPPERS MAN.
<3

dude.
seriously.
put me in so i can stab that guy in the fucking throat.
seriously.

Oh my god.. That fucktard needs to go die in a fucking hole or rot in hell that little asshole what the fuck is wrong with him? Rapin her and what the fuck why the hell that litfle

oh my god, that was intense.

Rahne...this was an intense chapter!
I bet Zayn is going to kick Rex's ass!
Oh man...

Ooh man.