Smoke on the Water - Comments

Contest Comment: First of all I'd like to thank you for joining my contest and getting your entry in on time =]. Secondly, I thought this story was very well written. You made me love characters and hate characters, which is what I was looking for in a story. I understand both Natasha and Brody's perspectives and I think you did a good job portraying their character. Overall, very good job!

I love this!!! It's like a freakng soap opera! Update soon!

Very well written, It reminds me of when i graduated high school this past summer

I have to say, I love Brody's relationship with his father, and I like the fact that Peter's attitude rubbed off on Brody. There both just so chill and calm. I like it ::thumbsup:

Please update soon!

Just found this story, and I'm already hooked! Can't to read about how the meeting goes!

BTW: I love your layout!

~Update soon, chicka!

Okay, I just read chapter four and metephorically, ah how you say, SHIT MY PANTS! OMFG she's... she's... she and Brody. AAHHHHHH!!! I was so happy that Brody reacted well. So many teenage boys in his position would just run for the hills.

Being a huge fan of all yoru work, I'm so happy you're writing something drama-filled. I know you'll do great because of all your already amazing drama-filled stories. Hope you do well in your contest! Can't wait to read more!