March 10th, 2013 at 03:02am
Set it on Fire - Comments
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Wow the sexual tension between them is amazing. It's kinda funny to see Syn trying to be all intimidating but at the same time he's scared of his reaction to her. Can't wait to read more.March 10th, 2013 at 12:00am
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I just read this whole thing! I'm not usually into the gang-themed stories, but I really like this. I couldn't stop reading once I started. Lol. So keep it up! I'm DYING for something more concrete to happen between Alex and Syn. You're teasing me as much as he is teasing her. :PMarch 9th, 2013 at 12:02pm
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@ purple89
Thanks Lady:)March 9th, 2013 at 05:23am -
Thanks lady:)March 9th, 2013 at 05:23am
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@ BeenDownThatRoad
i hope so too dammit otherwise imma march over to your side of Canada and kick you! teehee!! and you always have my support darrrrrlin!March 9th, 2013 at 05:13am -
@ purple89
Thanks for the support:D Hopefully I will be able to update a lot more now:) and thanks for commenting!! I love feedback:)March 9th, 2013 at 05:11am -
friggin finally woman!!!!!!! i missed this story!! God i loved the tension between them and i love how Syn keeps flipping that switch in his head. one second he's cold and detatched and the next minute he's all up in her face and omg!! i could so picture that part where he had her against the wall being all dark and seductive! unngggghh!! yehhh!! please update this soon!!!March 9th, 2013 at 05:09am
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i love this story so much update soon the suspense is killing meJanuary 14th, 2013 at 09:40pm
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I've been reading this story for awhile and just been to lazy to comment. I'm really into this plot. I swear Brian is bipolar. I'm anxiously waiting for the next update! Lovely writing, my dear. Update soon. :)January 1st, 2013 at 09:32pm
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apparently i'm behind like two chapters or something so let's catch up: 1) holy crap brian killed a guy. 2) holy crap he killed someone to protect her. 3) holy CRAP why would she run? like i get that she was scared shitless but like.. really? he's gonna find you. 4) he's being wayyyy sweet in the car and afterwards. OMGAAHHHHHDecember 31st, 2012 at 03:04am
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The last thing I should have been thinking about was the fact that I was laying right on top of Synysters man bits.
-hahahah that would totally keep my mind distracted...
aawh he was so sweet in the car.. stroking her hair.. wiping her tears and even made her stay quiet and close her eyes when they arrived so that vengeance wouldn't know that she was awake..
and then upon entering the mansion(or whatever) he just flipped the switch and became this dark man again.. damn he's bipolar or something..December 30th, 2012 at 03:18pm -
It was sweet how Brian was running his fingers through her hair and how nice at first he was treating her. I hate how he changed into a completely different man. I believe he is just trying to suppress the feelings he has for Alex. I can not wait for you to update again which I hope is very soon.December 30th, 2012 at 05:46am
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Wow it's almost like he flipped a switch and went from caring Brian to Syn at the drop of a hat. Somebody didn't take their meds this morning
It's almost as if he's fighting himself over his attraction to her and he brings Syn out to try and get some control of his warm fuzzy inner self
Cant wait to read moreDecember 30th, 2012 at 05:04am -
Amazing update. I feel so bad for Alex that she has no one there for her and she is all alone. It was a little creepy when Syn nuzzled Alex's shirt, but it is probably because he has feelings or an attraction towards her. I need to know what happens next now that he has Alex. Please update as soon as you can.December 23rd, 2012 at 10:22pm
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i love it update soon!December 23rd, 2012 at 04:27am
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Yes! I loved it, but what are they gonna do w her?December 19th, 2012 at 11:39pm
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Listen!! i want to know what happens next!!!!!! i really thought that she would make it a little farther than the living room before syn got her....goddamit!! i want to know what happens next!!!December 19th, 2012 at 08:59pm
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"Come out,come out, wherever you are-" yeah because that wouldn't sound extremely creepy in that situation.. i'd stay hidden too if i were alex
hmm going back home wasn't her best idea, and running from him to start with prob. just pissed him off..
damn can't wait to see what he'll do with her now that he caught her.. sounded like he played a fun game of cat and mouseDecember 19th, 2012 at 05:46pm -
Oh wow that was to intense. He came across as being so sinister (pun intended lol), but I don't think he wants to hurt her. Fuck her to death maybe, but not hurt her :p
Will be very interesting to see what happens nextDecember 19th, 2012 at 10:09am
:D Thanks for reading! Im glad you like it!. Eventually I have to go back through this story and edit the crap out of it so please forgive all the errors:S